poemranker ::respirometrics by bunniesnangels

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Free verse № 42593

respirometrics

Member since 2003 · Posted 5 Mar 2003 · 2 comments

remembering that you once felt quite whole and perfect without some other person soon becomes impossible. weird how the oxygen itself seems to change like you could use some land gills. 08/28/2002

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[9] <{Baba^Yaga}> 5-Mar-03/1:26 PM Reply
Clean heat.
[n/a] bunniesnangels › <{Baba^Yaga}> 5-Mar-03/1:35 PM Reply
thanks. i'm always curious about why some people find this one appealing.