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respirometrics (Free verse) by bunniesnangels remembering that
you once felt quite
whole and perfect
without some other
person soon becomes
impossible. weird how
the oxygen itself seems
to change like you
could use some land gills.
08/28/2002
Up the ladder:
Distant Memories
Down the ladder:
The Bleeding Rose
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Posted: March 5, 2003 11:59 AM PST; Last modified: March 5, 2003 11:59 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.2086053 Overall Rank: 4442 Comments:
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<{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154
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5-Mar-03/1:26 PM
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Clean heat.
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bunniesnangels @ 155.76.95.249
> <{Baba^Yaga}>
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5-Mar-03/1:35 PM
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thanks. i'm always curious about why some people find this one appealing.
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