Re: I MISS YOU by jroday	18-May-04/12:24 PM
First, I think that you definitely need to get some more experience before you write something like this. It's a good sentiment but you're ruining it with your lack of style and understanding of how to write. Take the advice of SupremeDreamer.
Re: ONCE by jroday	18-May-04/12:26 PM
This is better than the last one of yours that I read, but still, consider taking the advice in those comments.
regarding some deleted poem...	18-May-04/12:28 PM
How many people have you killed Shin Shuu (if that is, in fact, your real name)?
Re: Just Like Before by cuddlytiger17	19-May-04/3:25 PM
You're getting better. Just try not to force the rhymes so much.
Re: Unwed by gilded in gold	19-May-04/8:33 PM
unpainted moments, eh.....ok...I'll bite -9-
regarding some deleted poem...	19-May-04/8:34 PM
oh Sasha, you little scamp.
Re: Hmm... by tre	20-May-04/1:10 PM
Nope, but I guess there's some meaning to it.
regarding some deleted poem...	20-May-04/1:16 PM
sitting on a steamboat...whittling lemmings...throwing overboard...this could be a blast with the right chemical mixture.
Re: done than said by francis nor capule	20-May-04/1:18 PM
just a word of advice...stop naming your poems "untitled". Surely you can come up with a name for them. That title just makes the whole thing boring even if it isn't.
Re: Let Me Swing by caitydee	21-May-04/1:23 PM
not too bad.
Re: Balance by Signature	21-May-04/1:25 PM
No vote - because you voted on your own poem.
Re: Tony Blair's sagging purple johnny by Stephen Robins	21-May-04/1:42 PM
Does it ever get old being a bargain-basement -=Dark_Angel=-?
Re: Don't Say You Understand by cuddlytiger17	21-May-04/5:55 PM
This is MUCH better. Is this a new one that you wrote?
regarding some deleted poem...	22-May-04/9:30 AM
strange creatures, cicadas.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-May-04/10:49 AM
I can't decide if this is about schizophrenia or OCD (both maybe?). At any rate, you seem to have a pretty good grasp of mental disorders...I'm guessing you either have one yourself or know someone who does. This isn't the first one of yours I've read dealing with this subject. Anyway, it's not bad.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-May-04/12:05 PM
I really like this: Elton John plays in my mind, And I guess that’s why they call it the blues.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-May-04/12:07 PM
That was on The Sopranos last week. :0)
regarding some deleted poem...	26-May-04/12:22 PM
tequila....my arch-nemesis....once again you worm your way back into my life...bastardo.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-May-04/12:24 PM
Who was it that sang that song "We've Only Just Begun"? Olivia Newton John? I don't know.... Anyway, another good one.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-May-04/4:57 PM
now that's pretty.