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done than said (Free verse) by francis nor capule
i found myself dialling your number after you turned me away not once, twice or thrice even you greet me as if you missed me talk like we're still together even ask me to call back the conversation drags and you ask me to decide on what i really want i know what i want don't you see or feel it? do i need to tell you? after everything i did? i guess so... but never forget some things are better done than said...

Up the ladder: For Thou
Down the ladder: My Village

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.905148
Overall Rank: 9701
Posted: May 18, 2004 11:08 AM PDT; Last modified: May 26, 2004 9:50 AM PDT
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[9] edpeterson @ 68.79.27.79 | 19-May-04/9:40 AM | Reply
I don't like the last stanza. up until then, i had 10.
[7] wilco @ 24.176.102.131 | 20-May-04/1:18 PM | Reply
just a word of advice...stop naming your poems "untitled". Surely you can come up with a name for them. That title just makes the whole thing boring even if it isn't.
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