Radio Tele Libre Mille Collines

Member since 2005 · Posted 13 Sep 2005 · 4 comments

I am fiction Undermining Because it was the truth It had to be fabricated Bill never knew (and George sure doesn't) But I do I am fiction And I can see through the smoke Will it take eleven years to feel a million lives? Don't you see we're dying here? I don't think you do I can see through the red, and past the blue But I still don't see you

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[6] wilco 13-Sep-05/7:30 PM Reply

Baxter, you know I don't speak Spanish.

Seriusly, though, you've got some solid stuff here. I think you could do without the second stanza and cut the first down to about half the lines and this'll be pretty damn good.

[6] wilco › wilco 13-Sep-05/7:35 PM Reply

I'd probably give this a 9, that done.

[n/a] Muffinly › wilco 13-Sep-05/10:23 PM Reply

Thanks for the advice

[n/a] Muffinly 19-Sep-05/8:41 PM Reply

Im going to put up a revised version... and I'm working on a second part too.