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Radio Tele Libre Mille Collines (Free verse) by Muffinly

I am fiction Undermining Because it was the truth It had to be fabricated Bill never knew (and George sure doesn't) But I do I am fiction And I can see through the smoke Will it take eleven years to feel a million lives? Don't you see we're dying here? I don't think you do I can see through the red, and past the blue But I still don't see you

wilco 13-Sep-05/7:35 PM
I'd probably give this a 9, that done.




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