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Radio Tele Libre Mille Collines (Free verse) by Muffinly

I am fiction Undermining Because it was the truth It had to be fabricated Bill never knew (and George sure doesn't) But I do I am fiction And I can see through the smoke Will it take eleven years to feel a million lives? Don't you see we're dying here? I don't think you do I can see through the red, and past the blue But I still don't see you

wilco 13-Sep-05/7:30 PM
Baxter, you know I don't speak Spanish.

Seriusly, though, you've got some solid stuff here. I think you could do without the second stanza and cut the first down to about half the lines and this'll be pretty damn good.




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