Re: father Worked Nights by poetandknowit	27-Aug-02/7:37 PM
Hate to state the obvious but given the title of the piece it was it would seem written by somebody's child.
Re: Suicide III by disturbedone182	27-Aug-02/7:16 PM
OK enough is enough.I couldn't take 'Suicide II' or any future Suicides. You should listen to 'Don't Try Suicide' by Queen,track 2 side 2 'The Game' album and see if the great man can steer you in the right direction.
Re: Falling in Love by disturbedone182	27-Aug-02/7:08 PM
Yeah 'fraid so.I take it you are talking about the film which I have never seen, somebody just mentioned it recently.Either that or I have become victim to what I think is my second failure to understand an Americanism this evening.
Re: Falling in Love by disturbedone182	27-Aug-02/7:03 PM
Not bad. Why 182? This number for some reason keeps coming up.Are you referring to Blink 182 or maybe Kurt 182 or something else.Please satisfy my curiousity.
Re: Comparisons by anagram	27-Aug-02/6:48 PM
Yeah this was not really a good one to post as it was based on a specific event in my life and the parts that are obvious to me are probably not to others. It was an attempt at irony as the 'angel' concerned worked in an office called 'comparisons'. But don't hold back be brutal if you must I don't look for tit for tat praise.
Re: Daughter by pkdrunner	27-Aug-02/6:44 PM
I liked it as well and will give it 6 plus the 2 that Dark Angel held back 8/20
Re: Daughter by pkdrunner	27-Aug-02/6:43 PM
I liked it as well and will give it 6 plus the 2 that Dark Angel held back 8/20
Re: In these boots by http://David Bowman	26-Aug-02/2:59 PM
I understand a correction is in order - that should be 17 games
Re: Choking by SoulSlippedAway	24-Aug-02/2:40 PM
If a poem appears to be "teenage angst," does that automatically make it bad. To many of this site's critics write in a similar style and seem to consider anything different substandard.(Shame). Incidently it would seem a tad hypocritical to comment on typos when including 1 or 2 that paragraph that is doing the criticising.Any here?
Re: The Precious Thing by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	22-Aug-02/11:52 AM
Very good 7.
Re: Wise Clogg! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	21-Aug-02/11:11 AM
Mine too
Re: Hunny by Venus	21-Aug-02/10:58 AM
Excellent one of my favourites so far.
Re: In these boots by http://David Bowman	17-Aug-02/5:40 PM
If you are the "real" Dave Bowman then the ending is hardly a surprise though I would never have had you down as a poet.Must be lots more - what was it 17 months spare time? Good 7/10.
Re: The Call of Duty by waltfreakinwhitman	17-Aug-02/4:48 PM
Will try to use the correct fingers the next time I try to type HUMOUROUS (UK)
Re: that boy by nessness	17-Aug-02/4:46 PM
Lets try using the correct fingers the next time I try to write HUMOUROUS (UK)
Re: The Call of Duty by waltfreakinwhitman	17-Aug-02/4:45 PM
Sadly I agree with Tarq.Very humerous.
Re: The Messenger (The Unreplaceable And Greatly Missed Mr. Mercury) by anagram	16-Aug-02/9:18 PM
Know you were talking to Frass P&K but just for the record I can take criticism and appreciate your taking the time to read the poem and offer your valued opinion which was along the lines of what I expected.
Re: Dirty Pops by Tarquin De La Bog	16-Aug-02/9:14 PM
More SHITE (or should that be PUSS).10 must have came from an alter ego. Now that is constructive critcism.
Re: The Sea by Tarquin De La Bog	16-Aug-02/9:11 PM
I enjoyed the "War" poem and voted accordingly but chose to keep 'Queens council' on this one, but as we are apparently being brutally honest - this one is SHITE and struggled to be considered a zero.
Re: Wondering by anagram	16-Aug-02/9:05 PM
-- 16-Aug-02, 09:02 PM Perhaps didn't word that very well.I was responding to a criticism of my rhyming ability from one who seems to only write open verse. I enjoy all forms but prefer rhyming poetry.