Re: To Diana, five years away by kawakurdi	31-Aug-02/5:41 PM
Excellent, except for the squeals of sexual intercourse.I feel some other type of squeals would have sufficed.But someone had to write one and well done to you.
Re: Comparisons by anagram	31-Aug-02/5:13 PM
M My dear GW trust me it is patently obvious that a lot of deep thought and effort go into your works. Just that I have never considered writing my main hobby, I just write it occasionally when something either gets me down or really makes me happy or if I'm asked to pen some suitable words for a friends/family occasion, I have also been known to offer something up for nephews to use in school exams and the like but football (not US) is my real passion, music and pub quizzes also.It may be that one day I will take my own poetry more seriously but not just yet.I actually joined this site looking for inspiration but so far that has only came from yourself and one or two others. For the most part I enjoy reading the comments more than the poems(yours excluded).All that 'we're the greatest' and 'You're not worthy' crap splits my sides, especially when it is the so called adults talking to 14 year olds, touches left right and centre but is their ever a victory when the opposition are children.However I will keep in mind all that you say and would appreciate your thoughts on some of the others I have posted and not just the one that I consider the weakest.(Not that the others are literary masterpieces).
Re: Comparisons by anagram	31-Aug-02/5:12 PM
Replied to your previous comment on this the other night but then realised you were gone for a day or so, so saved the comment and will repost it now.Don't know if you got the reply when you asked 'she was sleeping now she works'I did post it as promised the next day but I can't find it now.If you are interested I will try and re-post
Re: The Messenger (The Unreplaceable And Greatly Missed Mr. Mercury) by anagram	29-Aug-02/6:59 PM
It is ones place of evening rest,think UK rather than just Scots and is to where I must now head.Thanks for company.
Re: The Messenger (The Unreplaceable And Greatly Missed Mr. Mercury) by anagram	29-Aug-02/6:51 PM
No no. Even in death the great man can fight his own corner.He certainly had his faults but his genius far outweighs his failings.
Re: All Around Me by brazen	29-Aug-02/6:47 PM
Just realised you must be from the UK DA.Surely Roy wasn't screened across the pond.
Re: Comparisons by anagram	29-Aug-02/6:45 PM
Hey no problem P&K was not looking for sympathy vote, just thought it was a bit strange.Been diagnosed a few months now and all are just getting on with it.Will pass on your thoughts which I'm sure will be well received.Puts things into perspective though to be so close.
Re: The Messenger (The Unreplaceable And Greatly Missed Mr. Mercury) by anagram	29-Aug-02/6:39 PM
That's cool, time to hit scratcher anyway before I can see through 360 degrees.Where I'm going and where I've been.
Re: All Around Me by brazen	29-Aug-02/6:37 PM
I like this simplicity.Say what you see.
Re: The Messenger (The Unreplaceable And Greatly Missed Mr. Mercury) by anagram	29-Aug-02/6:32 PM
Oh I see, do you mean the whole page spreads to accomodate all the a's until they move to next page.
Re: The Messenger (The Unreplaceable And Greatly Missed Mr. Mercury) by anagram	29-Aug-02/6:31 PM
No seems my whole pages are spread DA.Probably my inability to grasp modern technology.
Re: Pedophile by Lenore	29-Aug-02/6:27 PM
Yeah thought provoking,not bad.Spelling's a bit criminal though.
Re: The Messenger (The Unreplaceable And Greatly Missed Mr. Mercury) by anagram	29-Aug-02/6:18 PM
Are everybody elses comments spread right across the screen making them a pain in the arse to read or is it just my shitty computer.
Re: Comparisons by anagram	29-Aug-02/6:15 PM
Incidently just read your cancer Haikus after pub quiz comments,not relevant really but I do these quizzes with my mate who has brain cancer at 39 and a couple of months to live.Just found it a bit eerie that I should come across this poem after remarking about the pub quiz.
Re: Comparisons by anagram	29-Aug-02/6:07 PM
Sorry P&K just back from one which we lost (something of a rarity)could have done with your help.Long drive home though.However suitably full of the frothy stuff so a good time was had nonetheless.
Re: Comparisons by anagram	29-Aug-02/5:45 PM
My dear GW trust me it is patently obvious that a lot of deep thought and effort go into your works. Just that I have never considered writing my main hobby, I just write it occasionally when something either gets me down or really makes me happy or if I'm asked to pen some suitable words for a friends/family occasion, I have also been known to offer something up for nephews to use in school exams and the like but football (not US) is my real passion, music and pub quizzes also.It may be that one day I will take my own poetry more seriously but not just yet.I actually joined this site looking for inspiration but so far that has only came from yourself and one or two others. For the most part I enjoy reading the comments more than the poems(yours excluded).All that 'we're the greatest' and 'You're not worthy' crap splits my sides, especially when it is the so called adults talking to 14 year olds, touches left right and centre but is their ever a victory when the opposition are children.However I will keep in mind all that you say and would appreciate your thoughts on some of the others I have posted and not just the one that I consider the weakest.(Not that the others are literary masterpieces).
Re: The Ballet Studio by Corey McHattan	28-Aug-02/6:06 PM
Excellent.
Re: Fetch by Limness	28-Aug-02/5:53 PM
Excellent, I've had one as well. He's a basket case short of his bed He walks backwards while wagging his head.
Re: Comparisons by anagram	28-Aug-02/5:47 PM
Sorry don't do the re-write thing.Once it's down dated and signed that's it for me.Know this isn't whats going to provide the best work ever but I am with those who say that if you think to hard about it the idea wasn't any good in the first place.
Re: Comparisons by anagram	27-Aug-02/8:36 PM
Sorry GW gotta go it's 4:30am here , need my beauty sleep will speak to you and explain tomorrow.Night night anagram.