Re: the small drop by richa	25-Jan-04/10:42 AM
Loved it. Made me think. Its one of those poems that makes you read it again.
Re: Martyrs in suburbia - (we wander like breezes) by zodiac	25-Jan-04/10:46 AM
I liked it. Im no proffesional critic or poet. but i liked it.
Re: P.M.S. by Princess_Snowflake	25-Jan-04/10:49 AM
Interesting. Just a suggestion, when you get PMS, do something fun, instead of something that makes you realize how horrible you feel. Good Job, though.
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Jan-04/10:52 AM
Why do i not see any 4 or 0's? This poem sucks!
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Jan-04/11:06 AM
I am the authour
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Jan-04/11:10 AM
I have a ? for all you. How exactly do you rank aa poem? Is it by how much you like it or by how good it is?
Re: A Glass of Water by Princess_Snowflake	25-Jan-04/11:14 AM
LIked it. You must like water. I prefer pop or beer or chocolate milk or somethin. BTW, rockmage, do give everything a 10? Just wondering. Good job. ill say...7.
Re: Once the moon turned me into a hairy vagina by horus8	25-Jan-04/11:16 AM
Huh. Well...ill give it a five. Good, could be better, but good.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Jan-04/2:36 PM
BTW, Mr andrewjthomas, do you really think that your piss poem is better than mine???
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Jan-04/4:13 PM
nice...i am no proffessional (as you have probably already realized :) ) but i like it, its got style. Nice work. Does a 9 work for you?
Re: Reconstruction by andrewjthomas	26-Jan-04/4:19 PM
Huh. I am definitley not your biggest fan. But i like this one. 8 work for you?
Re: sunday morning precarious by andrewjthomas	27-Jan-04/3:09 PM
uh...i like this one. Its kinda like a personal narative but, you know, like way better. BTW: where did your piss test go??? :)
Re: Wartner by unouluvme	25-Feb-04/2:44 PM
i didnt really expect anuone to read/care about this... it was one of my "God, i am so bored right now, hummm...well, lets see what cool sites are on the internet..." poems. Haha. oh well...thanks for the comments!
Re: Wartner by unouluvme	28-Feb-04/8:49 AM
feel free to give suggestions...i cant spell so youll have to ignore that part. Well, thanks for the comments!
Re: Shower by unouluvme	28-Feb-04/5:15 PM
thanks...i dont know, does it flow well enough? I cant tell cause its my own poem.
regarding some deleted poem...	28-Feb-04/5:17 PM
does it sound better if you say fast or slow?
Re: Shark by cleverdevice	28-Feb-04/5:22 PM
How old are you?
Re: Shark by cleverdevice	28-Feb-04/5:25 PM
Not one of my favorites, but i suppose that is because i prefer darker, more, um...sensitive poetry.
Re: Nude Reclining by cleverdevice	28-Feb-04/5:30 PM
what exactly are you talking about?
regarding some deleted poem...	28-Feb-04/5:33 PM
For some reason this makes me laugh...