| Re: i am on the carpet by silvertongueddevil |
19-Aug-02/10:47 PM |
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yes, this works really well when read fast and rambling - took me a few reads to get the cadence right, but yes, I've got it! 7/10
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| Re: would i be considered crazy by silvertongueddevil |
19-Aug-02/10:26 PM |
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Not at all crazy in my opinion, but I'm sure the poor girl has long since run screaming from your obsessive clutches. 8/10
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| Re: To You, In Warmer Climes by <~> |
19-Aug-02/7:59 PM |
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oh! so glad for the rewrite, as I missed this the first time around. So much here, so much, it makes me tingly. 10/10
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| Re: Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit |
19-Aug-02/7:01 PM |
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Damn! I like it. Hunny? Is that you? 7/10
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| Re: Pi'd Piper by [mojo] |
18-Aug-02/4:51 PM |
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I must admit his tune has charmed me more times than I can remember. Really excellent. 10/10
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| Re: Arachnid by quantumenterprises |
18-Aug-02/11:45 AM |
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Snappy rhythm and jolly good fun + I love spiders too. 9/10
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| Re: Thornapple the Babyfat by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
18-Aug-02/10:32 AM |
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8/10 I'd like to hear it with the music.
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| Re: tears beyond hope by Mystifying |
17-Aug-02/1:07 PM |
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i all sew sport publik edekashun, butt alls she need is luv! I'm really just mystified that mystifying is spelled correctly. It's a mystery, a riddle, wrapped in an enigma. I think 'tears beyond hope' deserves a 'poetry beyond hope' award. Oh, this is getting ugly, I must quickly drain a beer now.
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| Re: tears beyond hope by Mystifying |
17-Aug-02/12:31 PM |
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Just perusing the Worst section for some giggles (thanks WFW & DA), and came across this literary masterpiece. I don't make a habit of commenting on pieces like this one, but I must say that this truly made me weep. 1/10 for the consistent usage of one of my all-time favorite words, 'alls'.
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| Re: The Messenger (The Unreplaceable And Greatly Missed Mr. Mercury) by anagram |
17-Aug-02/10:32 AM |
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P&K, I wouldn't concern myself too much about the poor fella; the occasional basal cell has become a badge of honor for those happy golfer republican types. And I'd ask you to kindly keep my big hills out of this.
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| Re: The Messenger (The Unreplaceable And Greatly Missed Mr. Mercury) by anagram |
17-Aug-02/9:49 AM |
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To P&K, one eventually becomes accustomed to the lack of oxygen up here. You will soon begin operating on a new and exciting level of consciousness. 6/10 for the lovely tribute. mama mia.
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| Re: Louder by Venus |
16-Aug-02/4:02 PM |
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| Re: Louder by Venus |
16-Aug-02/3:45 PM |
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P&K, yes it should read 'in' a canoe. Aside from that, what do you think?
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| Re: Exquisite Explosion by Venus |
16-Aug-02/3:24 PM |
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A coming thunderstorm will work if you like, but think of it on a more erotic level...
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| Re: Louder by Venus |
16-Aug-02/3:18 PM |
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| Re: Hunny by Venus |
16-Aug-02/2:19 PM |
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Doylum, you fecking cunt, don't you know that when Frank Sinatra sings Stormy Weather the flies and the spiders get along together? Hmm? Hmm?
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| Re: Hunny by Venus |
16-Aug-02/1:57 PM |
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Thank you, you are beautiful and so are your Cake lyrics. Doylum's favorite band is The Monkees, so what does he know. And this 'piece' is old, I've since wiped my feet, as you suggest.
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| Re: Hunny by Venus |
16-Aug-02/1:11 PM |
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You truly are a Doylum in every sense of the word.
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| Re: Thorns by poetandknowit |
16-Aug-02/12:10 PM |
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Was it really supposed to be a secret? The dual identity of Horus8? One only has to check out the MP3 to see that Bachus is an alter ego. You gypsy rogue you!
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| Re: Hunny by Venus |
16-Aug-02/11:11 AM |
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Yes you do. You may bow down to the goddess now, assuming your knees are still functioning.
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