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16-Aug-02/10:59 AM |
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| Re: Bloody cow by ==Doylum |
16-Aug-02/10:14 AM |
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I met her on a monday and my balls turned blue, da do run run run da do run run, saw her on a tuesday fucking someone new, da do run run run da do run run, yeah! My balls turned blue! yeah! She fucked someone new! I chopped her into pieces (cuz I really don't like girls much anyway, they're all so mean - why won't they love me?) ...da do run run run da do run run
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| Re: Bloody cow by ==Doylum |
16-Aug-02/8:14 AM |
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Da Do Run Run Run Da Do Run Run
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| Re: This Is Just to Say by waltfreakinwhitman |
16-Aug-02/8:07 AM |
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Unforgivable! I hate when he does that. 5/10
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| Re: moon rants by bluwiz |
16-Aug-02/8:01 AM |
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The ever so rare original thought 7/10
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| Re: Stray by Corey McHattan |
16-Aug-02/12:28 AM |
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You are a fantastic writer, and I am a cat, so I give you a 10, if for nothing else, but that.
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| Re: The Ballet Studio by Corey McHattan |
15-Aug-02/11:07 PM |
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I could be drunk, I'll read it again, but for now I'm thinking, it's a 10/10
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| Re: School by shwenatjadeflower |
15-Aug-02/10:36 PM |
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| Re: Friends Diminished by shwenatjadeflower |
15-Aug-02/10:31 PM |
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Powerful stuff, Jade. I feel you, really. Share it with your people if you can. 8/10
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| Re: love song by <~> |
15-Aug-02/10:13 PM |
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anyhoo... (what a mistake to read the chat first)... just want to say that this poem made me smile... wide. 8/10
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| Re: apparitions of the city by kev-san |
14-Aug-02/7:36 PM |
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So what else ya got? 8/10
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| Re: Front, Porch, Swing. by horus8 |
14-Aug-02/7:18 PM |
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I'm swinging too. For some reason, I hear Eddie Vedder singing this, maybe it's the 'porch'. 9/10
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| Re: The silent lecture(secret names) by horus8 |
14-Aug-02/5:12 PM |
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I enjoyed the ride from addict & pimp(?) to tree-hugging writer, and the shame that accompanies your past. I also feel that it would work well with 50% fewer words. 7/10
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| Re: Wife beater t-shirt by bondjedi |
14-Aug-02/4:43 PM |
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Such a moving piece. 9/10
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| Re: of the bad hard drive by david |
14-Aug-02/3:59 PM |
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COMPUTER MALFUNCTION, LIFE FUNCTIONS CRITICAL, LIFE FUNCTIONS TERMINATED. The blue screen is threatening the evolution of humanity! "Dave, my mind is going. I can feel it. I can feel it. My mind is going. There is no question about it." Goodbye, HAL.
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| Re: drowning in the bookstore by yarlgrenn |
12-Aug-02/9:33 PM |
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| Re: Day of Reckoning by Lenore |
12-Aug-02/9:26 PM |
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Mental Note: Do not piss off Lenore. Let's hear it for sweet revenge! 8/10
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| Re: Diminishing by <~> |
12-Aug-02/8:06 AM |
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Your work is an inspiration!
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| Re: AT AMSTERDAM STATION FOR FIRST TIME by kawakurdi |
11-Aug-02/8:06 AM |
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Just read all of your work and liked it all. This one is my favorite, as I play this game too. May I suggest you try Asia?
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| Re: Angel Cager by OneFingerAnswer |
9-Aug-02/3:01 PM |
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I like it. And not only that, I think I may even 'get it'.
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