poemranker ::Arachnid by quantumenterprises

DetailsThe poem, its numbers, and the conversation.

Other № 9754

Arachnid

Member since 2002 · Posted 18 Aug 2002 · 4 comments

The pollen-laden meadows ripple, The seas of grass on hedgerows lap; While clouds and swarms of insects wing, Arachnid waits within her trap. She'll hang so still and patiently, This summer's day her time will come; When tired and lazy meadow fly Will blindly find the orb she's spun. And so to dark, as insects roost, To hide away from cooler air; Arachnid labours half the night, To spin and weave, and make repairs. And with the dawn, and early dew, Arachnid's orb of silk will shine; But soon returns invisible, To trap the lazy meadow fly.

Rate it

0 is the worst, 10 the best. Pick a number, add a comment if you like, then send it. Keys: 0–9 pick, Enter sends.

mean 6.71 weighted 5.46 rank 2852 views 144 View voting details →

7 votes so far. Yours would make 8.7 votes so far

4 comments

[9] Venus 18-Aug-02/11:45 AM Reply
Snappy rhythm and jolly good fun + I love spiders too. 9/10
[8] <~> 18-Aug-02/11:57 AM Reply
lovely.
[4] poetandknowit 18-Aug-02/9:48 PM Reply
Good for the spider, but all that work for a lousy fly! Ugh!
[7] Jeremi B. Handrinos 9-Nov-03/5:41 AM Reply
I like spiders. My tarantula will occasionally devour a baby mouse in a five hour period. And it warns my of fires and impending earthquakes, or weird geothermal situations.