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White Wasp Boy - La Senza Superhero

by ==Doylum

Member since 2002 · Posted 26 Aug 2002 · 7 comments

Like sledge marks in a lightly snowed field, now i know this girl is quite real and not the perfect angel i took for some nosh on whom i gladly spent my hard earned dosh. but i also know if she caught me like this With superhero costume in place having a sniff She'd call up her da to give me a smacking And with this outfit superpowers are lacking so I really do try to curb the perversion and in my minds eye the snow will be virgin.

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[5] <{Baba^Yaga}> 26-Aug-02/9:13 PM Reply
SubSubSubZero mr.downey jr. you fail, you are the clean-cut. The hind wing of a mut cricket. a blunder boob bleefing crab grass.armywormarmyworm shovel stealer.premenstraul VTOL. indian whiskey arrow lit Conestoga wagon. Burn Cad! fucking. you sir are none other than a county clerk wasting my FUCKING time and since your supposedly not ameri'canned you wont get the sting of it either. recrudescence!
[10] horus8 26-Aug-02/9:26 PM Reply
Actually at a second glance this is fucking way avant-garde. what scullion ye are louse riddled irish kike with a vasoconstrictor for a bike 10/10! hurray for spuds five lehgged cow fiddler 'pon milk crates' running through the lillies of the cubicle. punch in plebian.w
[n/a] <~> 27-Aug-02/6:17 AM Reply
what a crafty game this is, D. makes me re-think the whole new-relationship business. i suppose we all do it, unless we're latched onto a looooong termer, as are some of my friends, who have chosen to keep their eyes shut, or at least averted, but, why do we expect what we expect in the first place? i catch myself doing it, always. sucks. now, on another note, 'lillies of the cubicle' ha! i like that best. nice one, h.
[n/a] ==Doylum 28-Aug-02/11:17 AM Reply
Yes by jimmy cricket, that is a super little phrase.
[n/a] ==Doylum 28-Aug-02/11:17 AM Reply
Show us ye willy big boy.
[n/a] ==Doylum 28-Aug-02/11:19 AM Reply
but no rought stuff
[8] razorgrin 16-Oct-02/7:30 AM Reply
I'm grinning like a demon despite the mental image. clever.