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White Wasp Boy - La Senza Superhero (Free verse) by ==Doylum Like sledge marks in a lightly snowed field,
now i know this girl is quite real
and not the perfect angel i took for some nosh
on whom i gladly spent my hard earned dosh.
but i also know if she caught me like this
With superhero costume in place having a sniff
She'd call up her da to give me a smacking
And with this outfit superpowers are lacking
so I really do try to curb the perversion
and in my minds eye the snow will be virgin.
Up the ladder:
Arachnid
Down the ladder:
Flight of the Samurai (Act III)
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Posted: August 26, 2002 6:42 PM PDT; Last modified: August 26, 2002 6:42 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.4610424 Overall Rank: 2854 Comments:
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<{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154
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26-Aug-02/9:13 PM
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SubSubSubZero mr.downey jr. you fail, you are the clean-cut. The hind wing of a mut cricket. a blunder boob bleefing crab grass.armywormarmyworm shovel stealer.premenstraul VTOL. indian whiskey arrow lit Conestoga wagon. Burn Cad! fucking. you sir are none other than a county clerk wasting my FUCKING time and since your supposedly not ameri'canned you wont get the sting of it either. recrudescence!
Actually at a second glance this is fucking way avant-garde. what scullion ye are louse riddled irish kike with a vasoconstrictor for a bike 10/10! hurray for spuds five lehgged cow fiddler 'pon milk crates' running through the lillies of the cubicle. punch in plebian.w
what a crafty game this is, D. makes me re-think the whole new-relationship business. i suppose we all do it, unless we're latched onto a looooong termer, as are some of my friends, who have chosen to keep their eyes shut, or at least averted, but, why do we expect what we expect in the first place? i catch myself doing it, always. sucks. now, on another note, 'lillies of the cubicle' ha! i like that best. nice one, h.
I'm grinning like a demon despite the mental image. clever.
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