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White Wasp Boy - La Senza Superhero (Free verse) by ==Doylum

Like sledge marks in a lightly snowed field, now i know this girl is quite real and not the perfect angel i took for some nosh on whom i gladly spent my hard earned dosh. but i also know if she caught me like this With superhero costume in place having a sniff She'd call up her da to give me a smacking And with this outfit superpowers are lacking so I really do try to curb the perversion and in my minds eye the snow will be virgin.

<~> 27-Aug-02/6:17 AM
what a crafty game this is, D. makes me re-think the whole new-relationship business. i suppose we all do it, unless we're latched onto a looooong termer, as are some of my friends, who have chosen to keep their eyes shut, or at least averted, but, why do we expect what we expect in the first place? i catch myself doing it, always. sucks. now, on another note, 'lillies of the cubicle' ha! i like that best. nice one, h.




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