Re: Daytime TV by jessicazee	30-Jun-05/3:37 AM
Great, just great. SOMEBODY: Haikus are supposed to be about nature! zodiac: You can eat it.
Re: Try Thinking Too by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk	30-Jun-05/3:39 AM
I've spent the last fifteen minutes thinking about how intelligence may be like a dog with mange. I've got nothing. Sounds cool, though.
Re: Crying Tears with No Home by TLRufener	30-Jun-05/3:42 AM
"For someone who has cut his life short." "It was just his time to move on." "When it seems that his life just got going." "He had planned so many times to explore," "Or meeting the love of his life." "Struck down in his prime without a second glance," "To fulfill its lifelong dream."
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Jul-05/2:19 AM
The poem was decent up to "final splat". If you're going to say life is decent up to the final splat, please spare all of us.
Re: Born and Fed by Dovina	7-Jul-05/2:24 AM
"concerns the calf / only for the fun of it," is bumpy. You don't (typically, in any English that's ever existed) concern something for something else in that sense. Unless by concerns you mean 'makes him concerned, worries', and mayhap you do. Anyway, it's kind of like saying "flapping my arms concerns me for feeling like a bird". Do you see what I'm saying? Otherwise, I enjoyed.
Re: The And women by INTRANSIT	7-Jul-05/2:47 AM
I still don't understand the "And" part. I love the title, but the connection is lacking.
Re: Our Soldiers by Lenore	7-Jul-05/2:51 AM
"Their life’s the war’s ; sometimes their death is, too!" Yeah, that kind of follows logically, doesn't it? The rest is decent. Live from the desert. Over and out.
Re: A Wider Sky by elderking	7-Jul-05/2:52 AM
skies, not skys.
Re: sad moments by rbooey	7-Jul-05/2:53 AM
Good luck to you. Personally, I imagine God being thoroughly Old Testament and all of us getting the fiery poker in the rump.
Re: Almost Persuaded by Dovina	10-Jul-05/10:03 PM
I don't get the connection between "world spinning" (positive) and "uniformity" (negative). Just a nitpick. You probably meant "spinning" like 'dizzy and disoriented'. That's fine, it's just not the first meaning I got. Q: Does it take more work to keep an already-spinning world spinning or to stop it? Please include any relevant charts and diagrams in your answer. PS-Ace rhyme. Really.
Re: Endurance by Dovina	10-Jul-05/10:27 PM
Not good.
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Jul-05/10:48 PM
The best Islam poem on poemranker today. Did you know Sahib comes from the root word "to pull"? No? Ace!
Re: London Calling by Bluemonkey	10-Jul-05/10:51 PM
"bearded attempts" is great.
Re: There she is! by CarterTribe	13-Jul-05/5:08 AM
Is this a pop song from the early nineties?
regarding some deleted poem...	19-Jul-05/12:41 AM
Oh. Why'd you post it here, then? PS-Reply to comments by clicking on the green 'Reply' button. That's right next to the red 'X' which you already know about.
Re: Where did the word "ORIGIN" come from? by T. Jonathron Remp	26-Jul-05/1:00 AM
Don't you think the Romans probably knew what the word meant? And the Middle English? And, personally, I did. -7-
Re: A thank you note(Not a poem at all) by thepinkbunnyofdoom	26-Jul-05/1:04 AM
You are childish. This proves it.
Re: Worth by Dovina	28-Jul-05/12:11 AM
What's with the commas for apostrophes?
regarding some deleted poem...	29-Jul-05/4:01 AM
I wondered why none of the people you thought about were Arabs. Then I read your reply to Dovina below. Good job. We SHOULD feel bad about everybody except them. Love from Arabia, zodiac
Re: End of Me by sonawrote	29-Jul-05/4:15 AM
Arabic is the most etymologically simple language I've ever heard of. For example, the Arabic slang word for "shit" is a combination of the roots "end" and "ball". The Qurannic word for "shit" is a combination of "to put onesself outside" and "oil".