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Free verse № 128310

A Wider Sky

Member since 2005 · Posted 6 Jul 2005 · 1 comment

Defeated by your expectations, I'd treasured once, but now abandon. I turn my back on hearts held earthbound; I'll chase instead some wider skys. Though you believed I'd never leave you, (ever the Victim you're pleased to rescue) I shook my wings free of the self doubt to spring in flight, despite your cries. grinning wide, I soared above you, (threw you a kiss for once I'd loved you) then set my course for far horizons. My kiss clutched tightly, you watched me fly.

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[7] zodiac 7-Jul-05/2:52 AM Reply
skies, not skys.