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honey bee (Free verse) by ThePariahDog mellifluent voice hums
and speaks of labor
shared between workers
yielding sweet nectar
buzzing constantly
the drone shows favor
for they dance nightly
with a prosthetic stinger
please savor the taste
since i've been replaced
Up the ladder:
A Wider Sky
Down the ladder:
Sometimes
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Posted: May 25, 2005 11:29 PM PDT; Last modified: May 25, 2005 11:29 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.910598 Overall Rank: 9593 Comments:
B,
You could never be replaced... I still think of you, ya know? How are you?
Stalker much?
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I can't place the 'replaced' bit.