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That Moment (Free verse) by RION12 You asked me out,
I said yes.
It all started right there.
That very moment.
That very second.
As time past I never got to know you.
You knew everything about me.
Every secret of mine.
I never had a private life.
You were always in my buiness.
You cared about me and i cared about you.
I did something very wrong.
So that's when it all went down hill.
I guess I didn't care enough.
'Cause when we broke up.
I didn't cry.
I didn't care.
So at that moment I knew we were not meant to be.
Up the ladder:
Nothing Changes
Down the ladder:
The Greek Philosopher Poem; cutting wrists in the bathtub
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Posted: March 21, 2005 7:28 PM PST; Last modified: March 21, 2005 7:28 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.910598 Overall Rank: 9600 Comments:
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Which of the following do you think was your biggest mistake:
a) knowing at that first moment that you were meant to be,
b) doing "something very wrong", or
c) knowing at the last moment you weren't meant to be?