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That Moment (Free verse) by RION12
You asked me out, I said yes. It all started right there. That very moment. That very second. As time past I never got to know you. You knew everything about me. Every secret of mine. I never had a private life. You were always in my buiness. You cared about me and i cared about you. I did something very wrong. So that's when it all went down hill. I guess I didn't care enough. 'Cause when we broke up. I didn't cry. I didn't care. So at that moment I knew we were not meant to be.

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.25
Weighted score: 4.910598
Overall Rank: 9617
Posted: March 21, 2005 7:28 PM PST; Last modified: March 21, 2005 7:28 PM PST
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[10] zodiac @ 212.118.19.211 | 21-Mar-05/10:58 PM | Reply
How dreadfully convenient your life must be.

Which of the following do you think was your biggest mistake:

a) knowing at that first moment that you were meant to be,
b) doing "something very wrong", or
c) knowing at the last moment you weren't meant to be?
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