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That Moment

Member since 2004 · Posted 21 Mar 2005 · 1 comment

You asked me out, I said yes. It all started right there. That very moment. That very second. As time past I never got to know you. You knew everything about me. Every secret of mine. I never had a private life. You were always in my buiness. You cared about me and i cared about you. I did something very wrong. So that's when it all went down hill. I guess I didn't care enough. 'Cause when we broke up. I didn't cry. I didn't care. So at that moment I knew we were not meant to be.

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[10] zodiac 21-Mar-05/10:58 PM Reply
How dreadfully convenient your life must be.

Which of the following do you think was your biggest mistake:

a) knowing at that first moment that you were meant to be,
b) doing "something very wrong", or
c) knowing at the last moment you weren't meant to be?