| Re: The plains of Africa by horus8 |
25-Sep-02/10:32 PM |
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Herr Doktor, you should hear me reading this mother-fucker.
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| Re: The Writing Life #2 by poetandknowit |
25-Sep-02/10:52 PM |
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I like your poem. Speaking of mail, how would you like to receive a subscription to your favorite magazine? I'm selling them as a fund raiser for my school I need one more subscription by tommorrow to win a really big prize. what do you say? S.O.g
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| Re: The Writing Life #2 by poetandknowit |
26-Sep-02/12:36 AM |
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By the way dear Dr., there's a terrific website, www.todotango.com. I think you'd like it. They have a link to a few Argentine radio stations, the best of them being Radio Criolla. Play it and think of me. Sweet dreams, Caio.
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| Re: RunOnSentence by harrytuttle |
26-Sep-02/7:41 PM |
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Gorgeous. If I were you I'd try for something more novel then "Runs like the wind"
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26-Sep-02/8:07 PM |
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I believe you do capture. L's 7&8, S3, could be deleted. They detract slightly from not adding.
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| Re: A Day, Wasted by Joyleaf |
26-Sep-02/8:16 PM |
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This is great it many ways and awful in others. I don't know what to tell you. It needs work but I don't want you to touch it. I enjoyed this.
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| Re: A Day, Wasted by Joyleaf |
26-Sep-02/8:24 PM |
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what the fuck am I talking about, this thing is perfect. Some day I want to be the mom that comes downstairs and tells the blue boys to shoo.
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| Re: Deaf by sav876 |
27-Sep-02/9:17 AM |
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I came, I read, I voted. Contradictory. !st you're wishing to be deaf then you're wishing to be "this disease would just go away". Very weak. Seems like you wrote this on the run.
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| Re: West Sands, late afternoon in winter by Nicholas Jones |
27-Sep-02/10:31 AM |
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This is simple but not simplistic.
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| Re: Transfixed (#2) by Christof |
27-Sep-02/10:37 AM |
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"How definite you seem" brings the sensation of loving rushing to mind. I place my fingers to my forehead.
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| Re: Life's Unnoticables by apples_tim |
27-Sep-02/10:42 AM |
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S2 is anemic, donate some time to it. Sweet, reminds me of A Child's Garden of Verse.
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| Re: Bloody cow by ==Doylum |
27-Sep-02/10:58 AM |
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I have re-read through 6 or 7 of your works and can't find a thing to say.
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| Re: Witch to Wicca by Lenore |
27-Sep-02/11:17 AM |
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I can feel the witches burning. "And, like a child...children," is my favorite metaphor of yours.
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| Re: Black Heart by ThoughtfulSoul |
27-Sep-02/11:31 AM |
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All my love to you. My son boxes his friends on the lawn, It works wonders for them. I'm not advocating violence but it seems to me boys need the outlet. So far it's always ended positively. I like your poem.
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| Re: Bobbing for Apples by Rex Karrs |
28-Sep-02/9:20 AM |
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Not as good as your 1st one, but still excellent. Fallow is a favorite word. Welcome.
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| Re: Liberty bells & Disney Land by horus8 |
30-Sep-02/1:15 PM |
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Very powerful towards the end. I like the way this thing builds. Line 7 seems to have a grammatical error of some kind, or I just don't get it.
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| Re: Wednesday's Breaking by poetandknowit |
30-Sep-02/1:36 PM |
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Left me with a sad creepy feeling.
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30-Sep-02/1:51 PM |
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Boring piece of crap. Good title.
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| Re: A Sign on a Giant Donut at a Twenty Four Hour a Day Donut Shop Overlooking Pacific Coast Highway in Sunset Beach California at Eight in the Evening on September Twenty Fourth Two-Thousand and Two by Dark Angle |
30-Sep-02/1:55 PM |
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Read Richard Brautigan. He would have given this poem a 10.
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| Re: At The Sloane Slattery on Saturday by Limness |
30-Sep-02/2:00 PM |
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