| Re: Triangle of the Courtyard Square by OneFingerAnswer |
23-Sep-02/11:07 PM |
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All those he shes he she she he hehhehehehshehshehheheheehshhshshsehesshehshehshehe's have me bored and uninterested.
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23-Sep-02/11:12 PM |
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This is dead honest and so I love it. Assertive and sad, ain't it like a poet.
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| Re: happy hour by Limness |
23-Sep-02/11:16 PM |
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Fuckin' a. As the dudes would say. You got this case won. Open and shut.
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| Re: Triangle of the Courtyard Square by OneFingerAnswer |
23-Sep-02/11:37 PM |
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It doesn't work. S4 L5 is muddled.
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| Re: Morning conflict by INTRANSIT |
24-Sep-02/8:19 AM |
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This is adorable. I don't understand the lack of triumph at the end.
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| Re: Since The Fall by harrytuttle |
24-Sep-02/8:28 AM |
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L12 & 13 could be a poem on there own, Good. the last 2 lines are over used. I think the poem would do better without them.
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| Re: Taffy by knickytoy |
24-Sep-02/8:34 AM |
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I never did like Taffy, but I ate it. I like this poem.
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| Re: Horseflies and Mayflies, Incessant Today by Christof |
24-Sep-02/9:16 AM |
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This poem makes me happy. I built a whole world around it. This and Butcher are my favorites. I hope your girl appreciates your poetry. I off to enlightened the masses. Today we're talking about violencia domestica. Have a lovely evening.
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| Re: The Left Book Club by Nicholas Jones |
25-Sep-02/7:16 AM |
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Please write a short story.
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| Re: visitation by Nicholas Jones |
25-Sep-02/7:21 AM |
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Thanks for the tour. You make me nosatalgic for a place I've never seen.
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| Re: WLPAN by Nicholas Jones |
25-Sep-02/7:27 AM |
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I'm falling in love with you. You are one of the few best of luck to you.
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| Re: The Nights Draw In by Nicholas Jones |
25-Sep-02/7:32 AM |
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I wish I could right as directly as you. You don't seem at all pretentious.
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| Re: Noblesse Oblige by Christof |
25-Sep-02/7:37 AM |
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You're sick with talent. How do I learn to write about things outside myself? I love feeling incompetent. It motivates me.
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25-Sep-02/7:54 AM |
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Dream away. Have your visions, it is your right. Why doesn't God set things on fire anymore. The burning Brita pitcher is telling me to bring you the good news.
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25-Sep-02/4:01 PM |
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Fuck me. What an entrance. Come in and take your seat. I am shocked into a silence. Much like prayer following disaster.
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25-Sep-02/8:15 PM |
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Are you an alchoholic? Drink is omni-present. Good again, great even. I secretly hate you. May we exchange DNA?
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25-Sep-02/8:46 PM |
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Fetal. A few more weeks in the womb and this one will be able to breath on it's own. Refine your parlance.
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| Re: Hey! Shut up, and cut my grass. by horus8 |
25-Sep-02/8:59 PM |
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Oh my oh my oh my. To find myself hidden among rotting blades. Joey just asked me what m-a-s-o-c-h-i-s-m spells.
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25-Sep-02/9:03 PM |
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Awkward, but not terrible. Just go over the words, mostly you need to amputate.
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| Re: Morning Glory by waltfreakinwhitman |
25-Sep-02/9:33 PM |
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