| Re: a comment on Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme |
7-Jan-04/7:26 PM |
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...mind me asking, what does "(sp?)" mean?
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| Re: a comment on Down The Hall by Blindpoetry |
7-Jan-04/6:54 PM |
Ah, okay. Glad.
...Hm... I'll see about it.
..I still don't understand how book can help you - as long as you know all (or most) of the ways to write the poetry? ..*looks up at his poetry* ah - I see... dang!
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| Re: a comment on Down The Hall by Blindpoetry |
7-Jan-04/6:32 PM |
Um... Really, I cannot tell if thats actual "advice" or if I'm the core of a joke?
...Really, I wouldn't care for a "Poetry for Dummies" book... Obviously the person(s) who wrote that are way to "artsy fartsy" for me. (or in other terms, "Ego-maniacs") ...I'd prefer to get better "naturally" and not out of a book.
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| Re: a comment on Anniversary Poem by Blindpoetry |
5-Jan-04/10:49 AM |
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we couldn't, long story short, we just didn't have time to plan anything.
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| Re: Anniversary Poem by Blindpoetry |
3-Jan-04/5:10 PM |
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Written for my ex girlfriend as an anniversary present... and smashing Pumkins is her favorite band...
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| Re: Too obvious by INTRANSIT |
3-Jan-04/6:30 AM |
"After some treatments
you'll look like a sith."
Is that a Star Wars reference? lol Sounds a lot like it... Nice poem.
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| Re: a comment on Where was god? by little_big_nose |
3-Jan-04/6:10 AM |
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People who disagree with God can roam this website and express there hatred towards Him, while the people who actually agree agree with God aren't and get mocked at when WE express our love towards Him (and Jesus)? ...That just isn't fair, is it?
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| Re: a comment on Where was god? by little_big_nose |
2-Jan-04/8:17 PM |
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Preach it, man, preach it! :)
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| Re: Whose God? by elizabethann |
2-Jan-04/5:51 PM |
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I give it a 7... i think it is an ok poem. But the only thing that turns me down is the whole God thing... but thats only me. Still, pretty well written...
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| Re: a comment on Just For Two by Blindpoetry |
2-Jan-04/6:24 AM |
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lol 8th more like it. - I'll try harder next time. I do admit, that one was only wipped up in mere minutes...
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| Re: a comment on Pawn by Blindpoetry |
2-Jan-04/6:19 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Just For Two by Blindpoetry |
1-Jan-04/5:13 PM |
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obviously, your idea of "sharp" is blunt and full of squishy fat? I thought it was sharp and full of tough material. I would of liked a plain four better than a four AND a smart remark...
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| Re: ummm by SILYLILGURL |
30-Dec-03/9:08 PM |
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haha! funny, no? I give it an 8, because i just thought that was hilarious!
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| Re: Pawn by Blindpoetry |
30-Dec-03/8:20 PM |
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someone gives me a two and doesn't tell me where I went wrong? *sigh* then how can I improve my work!?
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| Re: Fire by Pervy Elf |
25-Dec-03/9:59 PM |
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Romantic, no? hm.. though, I can't help but think this was inspired by sex...?
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| Re: a comment on I Love You by Blindpoetry |
22-Dec-03/7:26 AM |
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Um... You know what I look like? Hm... weird, indeed, eh? Thanks for suming things up for me! I don't see what I did to insult you, or to deserve that odd insult... but.. eh, life is life... I am I... poeple are people... you are bitch... ;)
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| Re: the rose layed on the barren grave by josh_5o |
21-Dec-03/7:07 PM |
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I'm seeing alot of 'the's ... Try to lower the number of them and start your lines... uh.. differently.. :-D
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| Re: a comment on I Love You by Blindpoetry |
21-Dec-03/6:20 PM |
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um... I kinda hope thats not a parody of my poem? Why so harsh? I thought this was a place for some helpful critisism, not a place to humiliate the lower writer! ...
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| Re: a comment on Questions Need Answers by Blindpoetry |
21-Dec-03/5:03 PM |
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lol No, I'm am anti-rap ... :-P But I see how it sounds like it...
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