replying on Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme
7 Jan 2004, 7:26 PM
...mind me asking, what does "(sp?)" mean?
replying on Down The Hall by Blindpoetry
7 Jan 2004, 6:54 PM
Ah, okay. Glad.
...Hm... I'll see about it.
..I still don't understand how book can help you - as long as you know all (or most) of the ways to write the poetry? ..*looks up at his poetry* ah - I see... dang!
...Hm... I'll see about it.
..I still don't understand how book can help you - as long as you know all (or most) of the ways to write the poetry? ..*looks up at his poetry* ah - I see... dang!
replying on Down The Hall by Blindpoetry
7 Jan 2004, 6:32 PM
Um... Really, I cannot tell if thats actual "advice" or if I'm the core of a joke?
...Really, I wouldn't care for a "Poetry for Dummies" book... Obviously the person(s) who wrote that are way to "artsy fartsy" for me. (or in other terms, "Ego-maniacs") ...I'd prefer to get better "naturally" and not out of a book.
...Really, I wouldn't care for a "Poetry for Dummies" book... Obviously the person(s) who wrote that are way to "artsy fartsy" for me. (or in other terms, "Ego-maniacs") ...I'd prefer to get better "naturally" and not out of a book.
replying on Anniversary Poem by Blindpoetry
5 Jan 2004, 10:49 AM
we couldn't, long story short, we just didn't have time to plan anything.
on Anniversary Poem by Blindpoetry
3 Jan 2004, 5:10 PM
Written for my ex girlfriend as an anniversary present... and smashing Pumkins is her favorite band...
on Too obvious by INTRANSIT
3 Jan 2004, 6:30 AM
"After some treatments
you'll look like a sith."
Is that a Star Wars reference? lol Sounds a lot like it... Nice poem.
you'll look like a sith."
Is that a Star Wars reference? lol Sounds a lot like it... Nice poem.
replying on Where was god? by little_big_nose
3 Jan 2004, 6:10 AM
People who disagree with God can roam this website and express there hatred towards Him, while the people who actually agree agree with God aren't and get mocked at when WE express our love towards Him (and Jesus)? ...That just isn't fair, is it?
replying on Where was god? by little_big_nose
2 Jan 2004, 8:17 PM
Preach it, man, preach it! :)
on Whose God? by elizabethann
2 Jan 2004, 5:51 PM
I give it a 7... i think it is an ok poem. But the only thing that turns me down is the whole God thing... but thats only me. Still, pretty well written...
replying on Just For Two by Blindpoetry
2 Jan 2004, 6:24 AM
lol 8th more like it. - I'll try harder next time. I do admit, that one was only wipped up in mere minutes...
replying on Pawn by Blindpoetry
2 Jan 2004, 6:19 AM
thanks, I'll try that
replying on Just For Two by Blindpoetry
1 Jan 2004, 5:13 PM
obviously, your idea of "sharp" is blunt and full of squishy fat? I thought it was sharp and full of tough material. I would of liked a plain four better than a four AND a smart remark...
on ummm by SILYLILGURL
30 Dec 2003, 9:08 PM
haha! funny, no? I give it an 8, because i just thought that was hilarious!
on Pawn by Blindpoetry
30 Dec 2003, 8:20 PM
someone gives me a two and doesn't tell me where I went wrong? *sigh* then how can I improve my work!?
replying on I Love You by Blindpoetry
22 Dec 2003, 7:26 AM
Um... You know what I look like? Hm... weird, indeed, eh? Thanks for suming things up for me! I don't see what I did to insult you, or to deserve that odd insult... but.. eh, life is life... I am I... poeple are people... you are bitch... ;)
on the rose layed on the barren grave by josh_5o
21 Dec 2003, 7:07 PM
I'm seeing alot of 'the's ... Try to lower the number of them and start your lines... uh.. differently.. :-D
replying on I Love You by Blindpoetry
21 Dec 2003, 6:20 PM
um... I kinda hope thats not a parody of my poem? Why so harsh? I thought this was a place for some helpful critisism, not a place to humiliate the lower writer! ...
replying on Questions Need Answers by Blindpoetry
21 Dec 2003, 5:03 PM
lol No, I'm am anti-rap ... :-P But I see how it sounds like it...