| Re: a comment on Soft Speak; Hard Emotion by Blindpoetry |
3-Feb-04/2:45 PM |
Damn.
Well, ok. Thanks.
The asters (i.e. *yells: go outside and save myself*) just say that I yell: yadayadayada... heh. I need to work on that, definately, I know...
Thanks for not insulting me in such horrific ways, though.
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| Re: Soft Speak; Hard Emotion by Blindpoetry |
2-Feb-04/8:22 PM |
Wow... A 0?
Please post what I did wrong, or what I need to work on. please? thanks.
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| Re: a comment on Soft Speak; Hard Emotion by Blindpoetry |
2-Feb-04/3:10 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Soft Speak; Hard Emotion by Blindpoetry |
2-Feb-04/3:00 PM |
Mind me, but I am only but a 13 year old... i do not have a big vocabulary like you guys...
What does that exactly mean?
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| Re: a comment on Are You O.K.? by sonawrote |
27-Jan-04/7:40 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Are You O.K.? by sonawrote |
27-Jan-04/6:54 PM |
nothing against what you say (as some stuff people reply to creates arguments, I've learned) ...but wouldn't that just be called a "poetic license"?
...but I'm kind of new to poetry terms right now... so correct me if I'm wrong.
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| Re: a comment on Just A Dream by Blindpoetry |
12-Jan-04/4:59 PM |
making fun of my rhymes? ..or are you really commenting on them?!
...serious question btw...
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| Re: a comment on Kenny G by Everyone |
12-Jan-04/2:08 PM |
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Kenny G's music is ok... I prefer more of a "ska" use for clarinets, though... (or w/e he plays...)
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| Re: a comment on The Blood by Blindpoetry |
10-Jan-04/8:23 AM |
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..there is so much blood because it represents my anger - which there is a LOT of...
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| Re: a comment on Fake Happiness by WithoutLife |
10-Jan-04/7:50 AM |
i understand better.
...I can write a dedent sentence. I've written a few short stories, and I think two are in my website. According to everyone who read them, they were good! ...so why not take a shot at poetry? ...if I quit posting, how do i know what to work on? Yes, I can read other "good" poetry, but I can post see my hurts at the same time.
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| Re: a comment on Fake Happiness by WithoutLife |
9-Jan-04/9:41 PM |
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Whats wrong with being an "agnsty" teenager? Being an Angsty Teenager, atleast, gives you a poetic feel in life - good or bad...
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| Re: a comment on Fake Happiness by WithoutLife |
9-Jan-04/9:33 PM |
....Your words hurt me...
...I am not trying to accomplish entertaining anyone except myself and whoever it is for... I simply post so I could get critisized and work on what is hurting my poetry. Obviously, its clear you hate it because it sounds like a novel? or it just sucks to no end? ... and i was half-way joking - and you are partially right. But without meaning, what is poetry? just some little MEANINGLESS talent you have? .. something that you write that doesn't express any of your feelings? You just care about how it is written and how it sounds? True, you do need good grammar, but you also need feelings. without feelings, it is meaningless. Why start a fight? Why say fuck a million times to act tough against me? I'm only 13, trying to improve my writing so I can give them to my love, or keep in my secret stash of "feelings"...
...why say thanks? I'm going to keep posting.
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| Re: a comment on Endless Sleep by WithoutLife |
9-Jan-04/8:49 PM |
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ah, makes more of a "sirious" sense.. hm.. well, that makes the poem even better!
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| Re: Endless Sleep by WithoutLife |
9-Jan-04/8:41 PM |
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..so basically you are sad/mad about waking up in the morning, so you go back to sleep and become happy again? I feel the same way... everyone does. haha
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| Re: Tragic Love by WithoutLife |
9-Jan-04/8:33 PM |
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once again... amazed by your words
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| Re: a comment on Fake Happiness by WithoutLife |
9-Jan-04/8:26 PM |
you do not need spelling skills to read or write poetry...
...they have editors for that purpose...
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| Re: a comment on The Blood by Blindpoetry |
9-Jan-04/8:18 PM |
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ah yes... something I have a bit to much of in all my poetry... Repeatativness...
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| Re: Fake Happiness by WithoutLife |
9-Jan-04/8:10 PM |
AH! I love this piece! ..so sad, but the lines
"Friends enjoy the sweet snacks of our get together,
But numbness has seized my taste buds." ...amazing!
whoever gave you a one - THEY should be the ones' in sadness, not you.
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| Re: Kill me by little_big_nose |
9-Jan-04/7:52 PM |
hm... I'm not much of a "ranker" ... but I give it a seven...
I don't think i understood
"Bury me
Six feet-deep, with care
Woulden't want anyone to find me
Life was way too fair" ... um, maybe thats just me.
or
"I didn't deserve to live on your Earth" ? ... I thought life was fair?
all in all, I liked it... just those lines, above, got me confused...
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| Re: a comment on Down The Hall by Blindpoetry |
7-Jan-04/7:28 PM |
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I didn't get some of those lines.. but I was able to comprehend some that gave me a clue as to what you were talking about, and I think thats enough to give me the morale of that...? ..anywyas, thanks.
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