Damn.

Well, ok. Thanks.

The asters (i.e. *yells: go outside and save myself*) just say that I yell: yadayadayada... heh. I need to work on that, definately, I know...

Thanks for not insulting me in such horrific ways, though.

thank you.

Mind me, but I am only but a 13 year old... i do not have a big vocabulary like you guys...

What does that exactly mean?

ah, I see...

nothing against what you say (as some stuff people reply to creates arguments, I've learned) ...but wouldn't that just be called a "poetic license"?

...but I'm kind of new to poetry terms right now... so correct me if I'm wrong.

making fun of my rhymes? ..or are you really commenting on them?!

...serious question btw...

Kenny G's music is ok... I prefer more of a "ska" use for clarinets, though... (or w/e he plays...)

..there is so much blood because it represents my anger - which there is a LOT of...

i understand better.

...I can write a dedent sentence. I've written a few short stories, and I think two are in my website. According to everyone who read them, they were good! ...so why not take a shot at poetry? ...if I quit posting, how do i know what to work on? Yes, I can read other "good" poetry, but I can post see my hurts at the same time.

Whats wrong with being an "agnsty" teenager? Being an Angsty Teenager, atleast, gives you a poetic feel in life - good or bad...

....Your words hurt me...

...I am not trying to accomplish entertaining anyone except myself and whoever it is for... I simply post so I could get critisized and work on what is hurting my poetry. Obviously, its clear you hate it because it sounds like a novel? or it just sucks to no end? ... and i was half-way joking - and you are partially right. But without meaning, what is poetry? just some little MEANINGLESS talent you have? .. something that you write that doesn't express any of your feelings? You just care about how it is written and how it sounds? True, you do need good grammar, but you also need feelings. without feelings, it is meaningless. Why start a fight? Why say fuck a million times to act tough against me? I'm only 13, trying to improve my writing so I can give them to my love, or keep in my secret stash of "feelings"...

...why say thanks? I'm going to keep posting.

ah, makes more of a "sirious" sense.. hm.. well, that makes the poem even better!

you do not need spelling skills to read or write poetry...
...they have editors for that purpose...

ah yes... something I have a bit to much of in all my poetry... Repeatativness...

I didn't get some of those lines.. but I was able to comprehend some that gave me a clue as to what you were talking about, and I think thats enough to give me the morale of that...? ..anywyas, thanks.