| Re: a comment on Crash & burn by Sunshine Conkey |
21-Feb-04/4:52 PM |
no.
Do you use those big words in a matter of seconds as if saying the word "the"? ..or do you sit there for a few minutes, thinking up of catchy words and phrases just to prove that you graduated college and that you were a geeky kid that would rather read the dictionary than hang with your buds on Saturday nights? ... - of course, you would of liked to imagine that - being as you didn't have any buds. -_-;
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| Re: a comment on Crash & burn by Sunshine Conkey |
21-Feb-04/4:26 PM |
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it fails - yet you give him a ten?
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| Re: a comment on Ducks With AIDs (a feeble attempt of something different) by Blindpoetry |
7-Feb-04/4:05 PM |
...so... in other words (whithout all these confusing five dollar words being thrown here) :
"Fight back, dammit!"
yes.. I see your point. :)
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| Re: a comment on Ducks With AIDs (a feeble attempt of something different) by Blindpoetry |
7-Feb-04/1:45 PM |
Thank you for making me realize that.
...As if that the list of twenty best poems weren't proof enough - or your overall average? heh.
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| Re: a comment on Ducks With AIDs (a feeble attempt of something different) by Blindpoetry |
7-Feb-04/1:43 PM |
hm... thanks.
I actually write 90% of my poems at school. I don't know why. Its hard for me to write here, at home, because I know my parents will pry in and think I'm spycotic. ...And I only wish your warning was sooner - one of my teachers saw my work once and next thing I knew, I was in a shrinks office. The dude was a freaked... ...so i keep under the radar...
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| Re: a comment on Ducks With AIDs (a feeble attempt of something different) by Blindpoetry |
6-Feb-04/3:50 PM |
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| Re: Ducks With AIDs (a feeble attempt of something different) by Blindpoetry |
6-Feb-04/3:27 PM |
oops I over-looked a typo.
"says" in the 28 days later part is really "days"
sorry.
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| Re: a comment on Soft Speak; Hard Emotion by Blindpoetry |
5-Feb-04/2:09 PM |
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...and you gained WHAT by pasting that?
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| Re: a comment on Soft Speak; Hard Emotion by Blindpoetry |
5-Feb-04/2:07 PM |
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yes yes, all of that has been said. But thanks!
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| Re: a comment on Soft Speak; Hard Emotion by Blindpoetry |
4-Feb-04/6:21 PM |
haha.
Anger has been reduced to little. k, thanks for clearing some of this up for me. At first I was about to blow hard wind to you. (about as bad as a...fart?) ...anyways, ok. thanks - I'm going to work on my vocabulary then write weird, awkward poetry about things that haven't been written about. (or thigns that are rarely written about.) :)
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| Re: a comment on Soft Speak; Hard Emotion by Blindpoetry |
4-Feb-04/6:18 PM |
haha... funny!
...Hm... Writing about 10,000 things that have never been written about before? And the nthrow almost every single one of them away and start from scratch? Crazy enough to work, maybe... heh.
...and the english thing - well, I was kinda lazy and didn't use Mricrosoft word to edit my poetry (ha?) ...plus, I got a C in english for my lack of respect for my damn teacher.
Yeah, I'm'a gonna try harder, write millions of crappy poetry, and hope to get a bit better each time.
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| Re: a comment on Soft Speak; Hard Emotion by Blindpoetry |
4-Feb-04/3:54 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Soft Speak; Hard Emotion by Blindpoetry |
4-Feb-04/3:38 PM |
...wait... I cant tell if I'm reading this correctly, for lack of knowledge on most of the words.
It was just a shtick?
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| Re: a comment on Soft Speak; Hard Emotion by Blindpoetry |
4-Feb-04/3:33 PM |
odd... odd, indeed.
Because I don't edit my poem with your idea, it is thrown into an abyss and walks out harmed from the brutality you layed upon my poem. At first, you say it is good and give it a ten. You suggest a line of YOUR work, practically. I say no, I really want my work to be My work and not any others - assuming this is the right thing to do. Then you turn back and give it a zero... because of that reason? This voting system is screwed up.
What were the things I did wrong? What things do I need to work on? Do something, like Zodiac, and give a reason for the zero. please?
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| Re: a comment on Soft Speak; Hard Emotion by Blindpoetry |
3-Feb-04/7:59 PM |
heh. Odd
10 - 5 - 0 = 5.0... very mixed feelings about this poem, eh?
Thanks for the compliment! :)
I'm really sorry, but I'd really like my poetry to be "my" work. I don't like to take anyone's suggestion on what to put in it. (nothing personal) But I'd just prefer that better, so no one will accuse me of plagarism or some type of crap like that. eh... But thanks for suggesting. :)
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| Re: a comment on Soft Speak; Hard Emotion by Blindpoetry |
3-Feb-04/3:50 PM |
urm... I speak English... Do you mean Native as in Indian? If so, no.
why?
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