replying on Waste Replacing by Phalkon
13 May 2004, 6:07 PM
And what? Bow'ls is a better reply?
replying on Remembering Pretty Days by wilco
25 Apr 2004, 11:11 AM
If your imitating Spock... why are you saying Spock?
Why not Scotty?
Beam me up. Scotty.
We have much.
Work. To do.
Why not Scotty?
Beam me up. Scotty.
We have much.
Work. To do.
on To Be Happy by embersandenvelopes
25 Apr 2004, 9:42 AM
I got that Don't worry, be happy song stuck in my head after reading this...
replying on Exclamatory Abuse by Blindpoetry
24 Apr 2004, 6:59 PM
damn me and my grammar...
Thanks, again...
Thanks, again...
replying on The Dead Sea by philn
24 Apr 2004, 6:45 PM
Who cares what people think before its finished? ...
If people said it was good when you had another idea, you probebly won't change it, when the other idea might make it ten times better!
If people said it was good when you had another idea, you probebly won't change it, when the other idea might make it ten times better!
on Help Me Water The Garden by Blindpoetry
13 Apr 2004, 11:58 AM
a bit weird looking, eh?
The third stanza is supposed to have four lines
The third stanza is supposed to have four lines
replying on Lemons Don't Grow by Blindpoetry
11 Apr 2004, 11:07 AM
I lack the ability to catch small mistakes maybe?
I'd think its done - until after posting do I see more mistakes...
I'd think its done - until after posting do I see more mistakes...
replying on Lemons Don't Grow by Blindpoetry
10 Apr 2004, 10:12 PM
..and yeah - I seem to like to write my poetry in a rush and huridly edit it... Thats a bad habit that I need to fix.
replying on Lemons Don't Grow by Blindpoetry
10 Apr 2004, 10:11 PM
the poem, itself, just expresses my hurt feelings from an old relationship from a time ago...
It means I'm in grief and sorry for the sadness I started...
...I think, anyways....
It means I'm in grief and sorry for the sadness I started...
...I think, anyways....
replying on Watching The Rose Grow by Blindpoetry
1 Apr 2004, 2:34 PM
omfg... I never noticed that I took the name of a store... crap.
Thanks for pointing that out - I'll fix that to... something... Once I think of it...
Thanks for pointing that out - I'll fix that to... something... Once I think of it...
on Watching The Rose Grow by Blindpoetry
31 Mar 2004, 5:36 PM
- I guess I forced rhyming to much... But everything sounded so much in tune to the rhythm I have in my head. So, I'm keeping it. And I also love what I wrote about. It's not sad, not angery, but a bit happy. Almost, but not to much into the happy mix. Just right outside the door. - But I wrote this in a cheery mood, so... what does that have to say?
replying on Colors Collide by Blindpoetry
26 Mar 2004, 2:17 PM
Was I just accused of being racist? No, I am not. This place worries more about there religion and color and *place something you guys usually argue about*, more than the damn poetry. >_<; My opinion.
- I was just saying 'black' because thats what I got when I mixed all of my crayons together (in K5, mind you) and the resulting color what black. egh. So what if I am wrong? Just replace 'black' with 'white' and my point isn't bothered by that fact, and keeps to its stupid reasons... k?
- I was just saying 'black' because thats what I got when I mixed all of my crayons together (in K5, mind you) and the resulting color what black. egh. So what if I am wrong? Just replace 'black' with 'white' and my point isn't bothered by that fact, and keeps to its stupid reasons... k?
on Colors Collide by Blindpoetry
25 Mar 2004, 7:42 PM
When colors collide and make one color, it will turn into a different color, correct? ... and if all the colors in the world collided, then the resulting color would, in fact, be black. Black meaning confusion and distaste, maybe? ...you know that if you mix the colors that they will all turn black, but you don't know why...
Kind of like this poem. I 'collided' all of my thoughts and made them turn into a 'black' color... Confusion and distaste, if not any other adjective.
You know that if you mix all of your thoughts togather, they won't make any sense, but you don't know why.
Or maybe we do.
Because the words don't make sense? ... but colors make sense. You see the black, don't you? ... and you see the words.
So you don't know why. You see the words. You see the black.
You don't understand why the words don't make sense. Why can't they be re-arranged to make sense?
...Why is the color black the resulting color? ... Why not pink, blue, brown, red, purple? ...
Eh... Thats how i think of the poem and how i named it... - of course, this could make no sense, whatsoever and I could be making a fool of myself (which is was i'm feeling right now) .... But... I think its healthy to express my thoughts every once in a while, don't you think?
Kind of like this poem. I 'collided' all of my thoughts and made them turn into a 'black' color... Confusion and distaste, if not any other adjective.
You know that if you mix all of your thoughts togather, they won't make any sense, but you don't know why.
Or maybe we do.
Because the words don't make sense? ... but colors make sense. You see the black, don't you? ... and you see the words.
So you don't know why. You see the words. You see the black.
You don't understand why the words don't make sense. Why can't they be re-arranged to make sense?
...Why is the color black the resulting color? ... Why not pink, blue, brown, red, purple? ...
Eh... Thats how i think of the poem and how i named it... - of course, this could make no sense, whatsoever and I could be making a fool of myself (which is was i'm feeling right now) .... But... I think its healthy to express my thoughts every once in a while, don't you think?
replying on Colors Collide by Blindpoetry
25 Mar 2004, 7:00 PM
hm... okie dokie
thanks
thanks
replying on Colors Collide by Blindpoetry
25 Mar 2004, 6:45 PM
Thanks.
and done.
and done.
replying on âIâll Drop You Off At The Next Cornerâ by Blindpoetry
9 Mar 2004, 7:41 PM
It is supposed to be weird and awkward. Thats the whole point.
One of the ways. (one... but there are many other ways that this could get to you.. bleh) ... one of the ways to make this get to you is to make you feel like you've read a piece 'o shit. And thats how the speaker feels. He feels awkward.. he feels stupid... he feels unreliable.. I don't know how to explain, but.. en, that was intended - and not many people are getting this at all. 0_o;
Hm... I wonder if my words made any sense...?
One of the ways. (one... but there are many other ways that this could get to you.. bleh) ... one of the ways to make this get to you is to make you feel like you've read a piece 'o shit. And thats how the speaker feels. He feels awkward.. he feels stupid... he feels unreliable.. I don't know how to explain, but.. en, that was intended - and not many people are getting this at all. 0_o;
Hm... I wonder if my words made any sense...?
on âIâll Drop You Off At The Next Cornerâ by Blindpoetry
8 Mar 2004, 7:32 PM
Ok, obviously ,what i thought was good wasn't good.
:-/
I know this isn't poetry, but can anyone donate critiquing? I'm desperate, now, for this one.
:-/
I know this isn't poetry, but can anyone donate critiquing? I'm desperate, now, for this one.
replying on âIâll Drop You Off At The Next Cornerâ by Blindpoetry
7 Mar 2004, 11:10 AM
.... Harnesse?
replying on Crash & burn by Sunshine Conkey
21 Feb 2004, 6:49 PM
...then you procede to read "Hard Times" in a desperate attempt to get big - being as you couldn't get big since your last encounter with your elephant girlfriend in middle school.
replying on Crash & burn by Sunshine Conkey
21 Feb 2004, 6:03 PM
how the hell did you know?!
Are you that stalker that watches my every move and wanks off every time you see me read Moby Dick?
Are you that stalker that watches my every move and wanks off every time you see me read Moby Dick?