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Just For Two (Free verse) by Blindpoetry The love I have for you
Is big enough for two
And that two
Is me and you
Up the ladder:
it's tough at times
Down the ladder:
Steak and Satin
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Posted: January 1, 2004 4:47 PM PST; Last modified: January 1, 2004 4:47 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.672192 Overall Rank: 12204 Comments:
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INTRANSIT @ 205.188.208.105
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1-Jan-04/5:08 PM
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Sharp. like a Manatee.
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Blindpoetry @ 68.106.171.15
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1-Jan-04/5:13 PM
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obviously, your idea of "sharp" is blunt and full of squishy fat? I thought it was sharp and full of tough material. I would of liked a plain four better than a four AND a smart remark...
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INTRANSIT @ 64.12.96.139
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2-Jan-04/5:57 AM
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Extra points for knowing what a Manatee is. Almost a high school grad, eh? look around. Write better. This is beneath your ability.
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Blindpoetry @ 68.106.171.15
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2-Jan-04/6:24 AM
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lol 8th more like it. - I'll try harder next time. I do admit, that one was only wipped up in mere minutes...
yeah...like that is so original--3
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