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Just For Two (Free verse) by Blindpoetry
The love I have for you Is big enough for two And that two Is me and you

Up the ladder: nightmare
Down the ladder: I'M STILL IN LOVE WITH YOU

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.25
Weighted score: 4.672192
Overall Rank: 12201
Posted: January 1, 2004 4:47 PM PST; Last modified: January 1, 2004 4:47 PM PST
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[4] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.208.105 | 1-Jan-04/5:08 PM | Reply
Sharp. like a Manatee.
[n/a] Blindpoetry @ 68.106.171.15 > INTRANSIT | 1-Jan-04/5:13 PM | Reply
obviously, your idea of "sharp" is blunt and full of squishy fat? I thought it was sharp and full of tough material. I would of liked a plain four better than a four AND a smart remark...
[4] INTRANSIT @ 64.12.96.139 > Blindpoetry | 2-Jan-04/5:57 AM | Reply
Extra points for knowing what a Manatee is. Almost a high school grad, eh? look around. Write better. This is beneath your ability.
[n/a] Blindpoetry @ 68.106.171.15 > INTRANSIT | 2-Jan-04/6:24 AM | Reply
lol 8th more like it. - I'll try harder next time. I do admit, that one was only wipped up in mere minutes...
[3] purplestain @ 202.184.17.249 | 1-Jan-04/6:28 PM | Reply
yeah...like that is so original--3
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