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Fire (Free verse) by Pervy Elf When I look at you
I know you feel it, too.
This fire burning inside me,
reaching out to burn even you.
Touch me here,
kiss me there.
Yeah baby, I feel it, too.
This fire burning inside me,
reaching out to burn even you.
Harder! I cry,
and harder you comply.
Faster you move,
reaching further inside me.
Deep
Deep
Deeper
Until you reach my very core.
Yeah baby, I know you can feel it, too.
This fire burning inside me,
reaching out to burn even you.
Higher and higher we climb.
Oh baby, now you're mine.
I have you trapped now,
just so you know.
Trapped within my fire,
burning for me and you.
Up the ladder:
Desire
Down the ladder:
Hoopla
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Posted: December 25, 2003 8:15 PM PST; Last modified: December 25, 2003 8:15 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.0448236 Overall Rank: 7005 Comments:
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Blindpoetry @ 68.106.171.15
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25-Dec-03/9:59 PM
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Romantic, no? hm.. though, I can't help but think this was inspired by sex...?
I once knew this girl that wanted me to stick my foot in her vagina,and I did, but I could never look at her without laughing again, so that kind of sucked.
'I have you trapped now' seemed a little odd. Can girls do that?
Other than that OK, there is a certain sadness underneath all the clumsiness. 218 view(s)
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