Fire

Member since 2003 · Posted 25 Dec 2003 · 3 comments

When I look at you I know you feel it, too. This fire burning inside me, reaching out to burn even you. Touch me here, kiss me there. Yeah baby, I feel it, too. This fire burning inside me, reaching out to burn even you. Harder! I cry, and harder you comply. Faster you move, reaching further inside me. Deep Deep Deeper Until you reach my very core. Yeah baby, I know you can feel it, too. This fire burning inside me, reaching out to burn even you. Higher and higher we climb. Oh baby, now you're mine. I have you trapped now, just so you know. Trapped within my fire, burning for me and you.

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[8] Blindpoetry 25-Dec-03/9:59 PM Reply

Romantic, no? hm.. though, I can't help but think this was inspired by sex...?

[8] horus8 26-Dec-03/2:17 PM Reply

I once knew this girl that wanted me to stick my foot in her vagina,and I did, but I could never look at her without laughing again, so that kind of sucked.

[7] richa 27-Dec-03/3:47 PM Reply

'I have you trapped now' seemed a little odd. Can girls do that?

Other than that OK, there is a certain sadness underneath all the clumsiness.