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Fire (Free verse) by Pervy Elf

When I look at you I know you feel it, too. This fire burning inside me, reaching out to burn even you. Touch me here, kiss me there. Yeah baby, I feel it, too. This fire burning inside me, reaching out to burn even you. Harder! I cry, and harder you comply. Faster you move, reaching further inside me. Deep Deep Deeper Until you reach my very core. Yeah baby, I know you can feel it, too. This fire burning inside me, reaching out to burn even you. Higher and higher we climb. Oh baby, now you're mine. I have you trapped now, just so you know. Trapped within my fire, burning for me and you.

Blindpoetry 25-Dec-03/9:59 PM
Romantic, no? hm.. though, I can't help but think this was inspired by sex...?




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