on Am I forgiven by da_dark_wan
20 Nov 2003, 6:37 AM
u will never be DA forgiven:o)
on The Only Solution by Angelofpain25
20 Nov 2003, 6:35 AM
cud have done better i feel.
on Missing you by kawakurdi
20 Nov 2003, 6:04 AM
This i dont like from start to the end..i missed the point
on untitled #3 by venusdemilo
20 Nov 2003, 6:06 AM
simple...yet kind - not worth a zero
on Mother you are not winter! by kawakurdi
20 Nov 2003, 6:09 AM
goodbye mother...
on Northern Ireland by longships
20 Nov 2003, 6:34 AM
i see a bitter man, as i read between these lines:o( - but i liked it
on Untitled by unknown
20 Nov 2003, 6:43 AM
OK - Ok - k....
I got the picture bub..Thank you very much
I got the picture bub..Thank you very much
on domination by midnight
20 Nov 2003, 6:45 AM
the feeling is there:o)
on some deleted poem
20 Nov 2003, 6:48 AM
u a rapper man:o)
on What is Gold by mojoro23
20 Nov 2003, 6:49 AM
yea that all sound kinda right:o)
on untitled #2 by venusdemilo
20 Nov 2003, 7:09 AM
:o)
on Ode to my Poopy by Samantha
24 Nov 2003, 6:22 AM
:o)
on An Anti-Tea campaign of 2020 by ShaNoN+960317485
23 Nov 2003, 9:56 PM
Advertisements is in part a two faced bitch.
Been a long time since id been IN - Sorry guys, busy as a bee & taking 2 much cofee:o)
Been a long time since id been IN - Sorry guys, busy as a bee & taking 2 much cofee:o)
on Breeding ground. by INTRANSIT
24 Nov 2003, 8:48 PM
INTRANSIT - ill say u doing great
on Intersection by INTRANSIT
26 Nov 2003, 1:37 AM
Well seems u have an affinity for daydreams and eye contest with the winged variety perched atop poles. Hope the fella deprives you of its droppings.
The stream of your words is grand till & after the verse âto this cross in timeâ
(mind, am not pointing fingers and saying its bad nor worse, but inferring it could be better) cause it give me pause to ponder a little of what you might have had in mind & what deviation from intent it had had.
But I find no cause not to relate this with a 10.
Ps, appreciate ya comments on my pieces â its critics like u I want & nothing like the friends that point a 10 & be content, as I be smiling my arse off, thinking the grand designs wrought by me hands. Just be honest & state you mind as u have in past. For it, I am & will be ever glade.
The stream of your words is grand till & after the verse âto this cross in timeâ
(mind, am not pointing fingers and saying its bad nor worse, but inferring it could be better) cause it give me pause to ponder a little of what you might have had in mind & what deviation from intent it had had.
But I find no cause not to relate this with a 10.
Ps, appreciate ya comments on my pieces â its critics like u I want & nothing like the friends that point a 10 & be content, as I be smiling my arse off, thinking the grand designs wrought by me hands. Just be honest & state you mind as u have in past. For it, I am & will be ever glade.
on My Love Letter by ShaNoN+960317485
26 Nov 2003, 6:04 AM
This I dedicate to my friend, Babe, who had asked me why I did not write Love poetry, whence we first met â To her in reply I now say, Love poetry sound like a dog that peeâonto the hydrant; water to the water with a little more taste. Hence something I refrain of to save the gray matter for a better use.
Hope you (Babe) like My Love Letter, it just a simple mumboJumbo framed into a weaker appeal of a rhyme.
Hope you (Babe) like My Love Letter, it just a simple mumboJumbo framed into a weaker appeal of a rhyme.
on some deleted poem
26 Nov 2003, 6:31 AM
If your comes to pass, please ring me up and ill tell you what it all means.. Till then take a freaking 10 and be gone
on It tells the time (a tribute to Roddy) by richa
28 Nov 2003, 8:45 AM
toad has a wrist boyo. That he does, but no watch:o)