| Re: Missing you by kawakurdi |
20-Nov-03/6:04 AM |
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This i dont like from start to the end..i missed the point
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| Re: untitled #3 by venusdemilo |
20-Nov-03/6:06 AM |
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simple...yet kind - not worth a zero
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| Re: Mother you are not winter! by kawakurdi |
20-Nov-03/6:09 AM |
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| Re: Northern Ireland by longships |
20-Nov-03/6:34 AM |
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i see a bitter man, as i read between these lines:o( - but i liked it
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| Re: The Only Solution by Angelofpain25 |
20-Nov-03/6:35 AM |
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cud have done better i feel.
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| Re: Am I forgiven by da_dark_wan |
20-Nov-03/6:37 AM |
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u will never be DA forgiven:o)
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| Re: Untitled by unknown |
20-Nov-03/6:43 AM |
OK - Ok - k....
I got the picture bub..Thank you very much
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| Re: domination by midnight |
20-Nov-03/6:45 AM |
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| Re: cylinder by kthulah |
20-Nov-03/6:48 AM |
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| Re: What is Gold by mojoro23 |
20-Nov-03/6:49 AM |
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yea that all sound kinda right:o)
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| Re: untitled #2 by venusdemilo |
20-Nov-03/7:09 AM |
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| Re: Synergy by searching |
20-Nov-03/10:22 AM |
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u better keep searching, cause me think this gold is mine:o)
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| Re: An Anti-Tea campaign of 2020 by ShaNoN+960317485 |
23-Nov-03/9:56 PM |
Advertisements is in part a two faced bitch.
Been a long time since id been IN - Sorry guys, busy as a bee & taking 2 much cofee:o)
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| Re: Wanting by Samantha |
24-Nov-03/6:20 AM |
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Hope u be wanting 2 say no more:o)
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| Re: Ode to my Poopy by Samantha |
24-Nov-03/6:22 AM |
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| Re: Breeding ground. by INTRANSIT |
24-Nov-03/8:48 PM |
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INTRANSIT - ill say u doing great
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| Re: Intersection by INTRANSIT |
26-Nov-03/1:37 AM |
Well seems u have an affinity for daydreams and eye contest with the winged variety perched atop poles. Hope the fella deprives you of its droppings.
The stream of your words is grand till & after the verse âto this cross in timeâ
(mind, am not pointing fingers and saying its bad nor worse, but inferring it could be better) cause it give me pause to ponder a little of what you might have had in mind & what deviation from intent it had had.
But I find no cause not to relate this with a 10.
Ps, appreciate ya comments on my pieces â its critics like u I want & nothing like the friends that point a 10 & be content, as I be smiling my arse off, thinking the grand designs wrought by me hands. Just be honest & state you mind as u have in past. For it, I am & will be ever glade.
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| Re: My Love Letter by ShaNoN+960317485 |
26-Nov-03/6:04 AM |
This I dedicate to my friend, Babe, who had asked me why I did not write Love poetry, whence we first met â To her in reply I now say, Love poetry sound like a dog that peeâonto the hydrant; water to the water with a little more taste. Hence something I refrain of to save the gray matter for a better use.
Hope you (Babe) like My Love Letter, it just a simple mumboJumbo framed into a weaker appeal of a rhyme.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
26-Nov-03/6:31 AM |
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If your comes to pass, please ring me up and ill tell you what it all means.. Till then take a freaking 10 and be gone
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| Re: It tells the time (a tribute to Roddy) by richa |
28-Nov-03/8:45 AM |
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toad has a wrist boyo. That he does, but no watch:o)
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