Am I forgiven

Member since 2002 · Posted 22 Aug 2002 · 4 comments

Am I forgiven For all da pain I have caused Do u understand That I did what I had to It ws a choice made by me Am I forgiven It should have never have happened this way Is it forr da best Is it for da worst I don???t know Time will tell Am I forgiven For all da pain I have caused I have done what I thought was right Does that mean that it is right We shall neva know Am I forgiven

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[n/a] <~> 22-Aug-02/7:36 AM Reply

i can never forgive you for subjecting the world to this crap.

[3] Frass 22-Aug-02/10:43 AM Reply

My, are you getting all persnickety lately, Zzin. Let's give those new to wordsmithery a chance to separate wheat from chaff. DDW, edit and prune your writing a little more, then submit it.

[8] ShaNoN+960317485 20-Nov-03/6:37 AM Reply

u will never be DA forgiven:o)

[1] Fearlesfan_04 24-Feb-05/6:37 PM Reply

no structure or thought .....i dunno are u forgiven?