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Am I forgiven (Free verse) by da_dark_wan Am I forgiven
For all da pain I have caused
Do u understand
That I did what I had to
It ws a choice made by me
Am I forgiven
It should have never have happened this way
Is it forr da best
Is it for da worst
I don???t know
Time will tell
Am I forgiven
For all da pain I have caused
I have done what I thought was right
Does that mean that it is right
We shall neva know
Am I forgiven
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Posted: August 22, 2002 3:11 AM PDT; Last modified: August 22, 2002 3:11 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.809275 Overall Rank: 10988 Comments:
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22-Aug-02/7:36 AM
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i can never forgive you for subjecting the world to this crap.
My, are you getting all persnickety lately, Zzin. Let's give those new to wordsmithery a chance to separate wheat from chaff. DDW, edit and prune your writing a little more, then submit it.
u will never be DA forgiven:o)
no structure or thought .....i dunno are u forgiven?
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