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Am I forgiven (Free verse) by da_dark_wan

Am I forgiven For all da pain I have caused Do u understand That I did what I had to It ws a choice made by me Am I forgiven It should have never have happened this way Is it forr da best Is it for da worst I don???t know Time will tell Am I forgiven For all da pain I have caused I have done what I thought was right Does that mean that it is right We shall neva know Am I forgiven

Frass 22-Aug-02/10:43 AM
My, are you getting all persnickety lately, Zzin. Let's give those new to wordsmithery a chance to separate wheat from chaff. DDW, edit and prune your writing a little more, then submit it.




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