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Free verse № 10513

Untitled

Member since 2002 · Posted 21 Aug 2002 · 4 comments

Fairy touches of wine-red lips Light fingertips shivering down pale ribs Glinting eyes growing darker Silken white legs pressed close together Closing warmth of satin hands White body glowing in the darkness Silent moans from pulsing throat Peach-tasting skin tasted, bitten Flower-light bruises blossoming by pearl-marked streaks Red labyrinths carved on backs The sweet smell of lovers' sweat Sounds of crickets from the window Loud breathing as tongues entangle Skin felt in velvet strokes Dark red hair spread over pillows White legs moved apart Hands reaching, touching, stroking Pleasured sounds singing together Heat of two bodies, limitless desire Warmth of soft curves gathered and kissed Glistening, glowing phosphorescent Drop of honey on burning breast Tongues tasting blood from maddened veins Gilded limbs wrapped together Bodies kissing like enwrapped flowers Furnaces mingling in waves of heat Desires mixed, trapped, burned up, reborn Touches like explosions, again and again Screams of want rippling together through the air Hands gripping harder Nails bite in rock-hard flesh Torn flesh bleeds as life begins Silence takes over again.

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4 comments

[6] PoeticDelicacy 21-Aug-02/10:47 PM Reply
Not personally my taste in poems, bu tI'm not really a romantic :)
[2] Christof 22-Aug-02/6:34 AM Reply
All your poems are on the same subject, using the same imagery and following the same present-tense progressionless structure. Try something different!
[9] ShaNoN+960317485 20-Nov-03/6:43 AM Reply
OK - Ok - k....

I got the picture bub..Thank you very much
[7] Shardik 20-Nov-03/8:02 PM Reply
Adjectiving to death.