Re: intent to refrain by skaskowski	5-Nov-03/5:49 AM
This poem sounds really good when you persuade a slightly deaf disabled old man, port-sodden like so many of his ancient tribe, to recite it directly into your ear canal using a method of recitation known as "shouting".
Re: On Visiting My Father by sliver	5-Nov-03/5:48 AM
Poemeranker has been flooded with a deluge of "dad" and "dead dad" poems in recent days. I refer you to the hugely poignant poem "Fathers" by amielou82: http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=73528 Full marks for keeping to this socially important theme! -10-
Re: Through DUSK till DAWN by ShaNoN+960317485	5-Nov-03/5:44 AM
Dare should i call it a poem - nay. Its my tribute for all the wonders of this world that i have never seen nor felt in person, but came to love & cherish through the books i hath read in my childhood; as they were my only link to understand the plant & beauty lacking in Maldives. Thank you GOD & friends for allowing me to remember the names so i can write this, MY DREAM & my evolution to love the beauty in the folds of the night.
Re: Fathers by amielou82	5-Nov-03/5:43 AM
Please tell me which of the following names you apply to your father: (a) Father (b) Dad (c) Pops (d) Pater (e) Fuck face (f) All of the above (g) None of the above Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!????????!?!?!111
Re: Saint Peggy Seeger by Retaliate	5-Nov-03/5:41 AM
Our Lady of Fiery Rhetoric! Guide us in this time of trouble! Let us sing The Song of Choice Our Lady of Burning Righteousness! Joan of Arc incarnate, Patron Saint of Passion, Light the way with your fury!
Re: a comment on Belgium and rose tears by SupremeDreamer	30-Oct-03/4:16 AM
Wow. Incidentally, sausage kiev is available in Natalie's Marriage Agency gift shop, along with a wine called "Bastardo", a wine called "Last Supper", a chocolate squirrel, and a pie made from "crepitating globules". It's all true: http://ma-natalie.com/gifts.html
Re: a comment on The Box by EouSou	30-Oct-03/1:44 AM
Woke up this mornin' Closed in on both sides Nothin' doin' I feel resistance As I open my eyes Someone's foolin' I found a way to break through this cellophane bag Cuz I know what's goin' on In your mind I'm a livin' in a box I'm a livin' in a cardboard box I'm a livin' in a box I'm a livin' in a cardboard box I'm a livin' in a box Life goes in circles Around and around Circulating I sometimes wonder What's movin' underground I'm escaping I found a way to break through this cellophane bag Cuz I know what's goin' on In my mind I'm a livin' in a box I'm a livin' in a cardboard box I'm a livin' in a box I'm a livin' in a cardboard box I'm a livin' in a box (guitar solo) Livin' Ahh ha I found a way to break through this cellophane bag Cuz I know what's goin' on In your mind I'm a livin' in a box I'm a livin' in a cardboard box I'm a livin' in a box I'm a livin' in a cardboard box I'm a livin' in a box I'm a livin' in a cardboard box I'm a livin' in a box I'm a livin' in a cardboard box I'm a livin' in a box I'm a livin' in a cardboard box I'm a livin' in a box I'm a livin' in a cardboard box I'm a livin' I'm a livin'....I'm a livin' I'm a livin', I'm a livin'....I'm a livin' I'm a livin' in a box I'm a livin' in a box....
Re: Love by EouSou	30-Oct-03/1:40 AM
Making love to a child Starts out by just a kiss I'm not sure I approve of your pederastic activities, sir!!!!!!
Re: Megan by RaVensEternalFire	30-Oct-03/1:39 AM
Change the last word from "soul" to "ass". -10-
Re: Fading Freindships by BuffysBack419	30-Oct-03/1:38 AM
Stunning. This piece works really well when recited in a heavy Indian accent. -10-
Re: a comment on The Santa Anna's fire and red sun by Bachus	30-Oct-03/1:35 AM
LOLTTM!!!!!!!????????!!!!!!!!!!?>>>>>>>>>??????!?!???!!!!1111111
Re: Who I am by Butterfly1120	30-Oct-03/1:33 AM
OMG LOL ASL!??!??!??!!!
Re: Where did you go? by Butterfly1120	30-Oct-03/1:29 AM
Had you been "deflowered" yet?
Re: Angel by Butterfly1120	30-Oct-03/1:27 AM
Change the last line to this: "God sent me an angel, I just call her Motherfucker" Such an amendment would serve to lend the poem one more layer of polytextual poignality.
Re: The meaning of Love by The Slender Blade	30-Oct-03/1:25 AM
"I can accept closure, But not indecent exposure." These two lines are sheer genius. The rest is cack.
Re: Tipspit by kingit	30-Oct-03/1:22 AM
This poem sounds really good when you persuade a slightly deaf disabled old man, port-sodden like so many of his ancient tribe, to recite it directly into your ear canal using a method of recitation known as "shouting".
Re: a comment on Belgium and rose tears by SupremeDreamer	30-Oct-03/1:19 AM
Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!!!!???!?!??!? You are the biggest dunce in the whole world!!?!??!!!
Re: a comment on Belgium and rose tears by SupremeDreamer	30-Oct-03/1:18 AM
Incidentally, I was there last week, eating fifteen sausages, twelve eggs, one hundred thousand chips, a million baked beans, and one very small piece of toast. And I saw you! Fellating the greasy Italian man behind the counter! OMG LOL ASL!?!??!?!!?
Re: a comment on Belgium and rose tears by SupremeDreamer	30-Oct-03/1:17 AM
Ah yes! That famous monument to "St. Gile". You nonce.
Re: a comment on EarthWaterAir - Hey! Look! IM MR FIRE! by Y2kSlamPoet	28-Oct-03/5:37 AM
I reiterate my five crucial points. 1. SupremeDreamer is a tremendous dunce. 2. His assessment of his own importance is hopelessly inaccurate. 3. His assessment of his own ability is hopelessly inaccurate. 4. The thoughts produced by his brain are not worthy of serious consideration. 5. He is incapable of following the most basic rules of spelling and punctuation.