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The Box (Free verse) by EouSou As I caught myself twirling into my concentration,
I became aware of my perplexity.
Trying to unravel the significance of my life,
and terrified of becoming a part of them.
Shall I lay down in shame and wither in my misery?
Or hold the very aptitude to rise above the crowd?
Up the ladder:
Musical Buttocks - Cha cha cha
Down the ladder:
The dancers
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Posted: October 28, 2003 10:42 PM PST; Last modified: October 28, 2003 10:42 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.4545455 Overall Rank: 2905 Comments:
I liked the last sentence, the rest has a little too much cliche to it
Piffle.
I think you should make me a sandwich and get naked.
Sometimes I feel like I am living in a box.
Woke up this mornin'
Closed in on both sides Nothin' doin' I feel resistance As I open my eyes Someone's foolin' I found a way to break through this cellophane bag Cuz I know what's goin' on In your mind I'm a livin' in a box I'm a livin' in a cardboard box I'm a livin' in a box I'm a livin' in a cardboard box I'm a livin' in a box Life goes in circles Around and around Circulating I sometimes wonder What's movin' underground I'm escaping I found a way to break through this cellophane bag Cuz I know what's goin' on In my mind I'm a livin' in a box I'm a livin' in a cardboard box I'm a livin' in a box I'm a livin' in a cardboard box I'm a livin' in a box (guitar solo) Livin' Ahh ha I found a way to break through this cellophane bag Cuz I know what's goin' on In your mind I'm a livin' in a box I'm a livin' in a cardboard box I'm a livin' in a box I'm a livin' in a cardboard box I'm a livin' in a box I'm a livin' in a cardboard box I'm a livin' in a box I'm a livin' in a cardboard box I'm a livin' in a box I'm a livin' in a cardboard box I'm a livin' in a box I'm a livin' in a cardboard box I'm a livin' I'm a livin'....I'm a livin' I'm a livin', I'm a livin'....I'm a livin' I'm a livin' in a box I'm a livin' in a box....
Why must you always pick on me?
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Intesting language - yess..... interesting....