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21-Dec-02/4:46 PM |
pseudointelleisjdcvsssssdctuals....OI....
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9-May-03/8:52 PM |
ok... I reccomend this person follow the trends. Yep.. even if rock aint trendy, (actually, a lot is now even thought it's mindless kids who think they know all this shit about rock which they dont) you can still like it, just be accepting to the "in" crowd's ways. It's really not hard to change a little bit if you keep a positive attitude. Its not worth hating yourself or hating other people for something you can completely control if you want to. Sometimes life feels like you're changing for the wrong reason, but in the end it actually turns out to be the right reasons. THE END. just some advice for people who have this problem expressed in your little lyrical formation you've created here. ADIOS!
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Re: Inet. mag. editors R jealous red haired Jews, oh and I'm 29 by horus8 |
7-Aug-03/9:48 PM |
hey horus!!! I haven't been around in a long time. this was the latest poem so I thought I'd sat hey and good job on the poetry (as always). had i been posting stuff I would have said a big HAPPY BIRTHDAY! k..adios..
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7-Aug-03/9:52 PM |
when I read this I went "woa" I couldn't tell if it was a good or bad woa hahaha. I like the "It's 2AM, Love" part.. it makes u sound british..or it just sounds good in a british accent. k..
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Re: God is a Lady by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
7-Aug-03/9:55 PM |
awesome title. great poem. The relationship portrayed between the devil and..well..God as the lady is very good. the phrase "kitties galore" kinda scares me though..hahaha the pink bunny rules!!!
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Re: The Final Say by Nightmare-Poet |
7-Aug-03/10:01 PM |
I would replace the word "depression" with something else like.. agony.. it made it sound so cliche and prescribed.. I hate hearing poems like this.. it reminds me of my old ones.. I got a really nice image thought with the veins in knots.hahah
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7-Aug-03/10:27 PM |
this is hillarious.. its.. DATE PLATE!!!
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Re: Can you believe this piece of shit was #1? by horus8 |
7-Aug-03/10:30 PM |
hella funny! yur so silly
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4-Oct-03/2:24 PM |
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4-Oct-03/2:25 PM |
wut the hell. WWCLSD? haha
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4-Oct-03/2:28 PM |
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Re: Drunken Night by Ataryu |
4-Oct-03/2:29 PM |
really simple and to the point and not confusing and I like it cuz it reminds me of a drunken night.
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Re: Chaos, Time, and Awakening by DreamerSupreme |
4-Oct-03/2:37 PM |
I really was enjoying this until you said "papa".. I can't stand that word, its like nails on a chalkboard for me, I don't why. I think it is because it reminds me of horrible Disney Movies. Dear God..
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Re: Who are the best poets on poemranker? (A list by me) by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
4-Oct-03/2:39 PM |
You actually had time to make this list?
I feel sorry for you, you have no life.
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Re: Often, I'll sit down to pee by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
4-Oct-03/2:43 PM |
this sucks. you get 10's and 8's for this shit and my pee haiku gets NOTHING and I thought of the pissing way back in the day. I have to give you a 0 out of spite.
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Re: Blissful the Fungae Forest by peaceseeker |
4-Oct-03/3:49 PM |
i love lime... good job!! I avoided this poem the title reminded me of some fairyland forest thing but I read it and now I feel much better.
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Re: Pumpkin Bowling by un_oying |
12-Oct-03/9:15 PM |
I love pumpkin bowling
umm why is there a penis?
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Re: DO NOT TOUCH!! This is my mega funny-joint! by Y2kSlamPoet |
8-Nov-03/10:13 PM |
what the hell are you on?
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Re: Sweet Goodbye by ashley |
11-Feb-04/6:08 PM |
not many people use the word anew..whatever works. This was ok until i got to "boo" then I just thought of You Got Served. hahaha. Team Boo.
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Re: If Words Could Explain... by Blindpoetry |
11-Feb-04/6:08 PM |
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