on The Story Of Man by sweetzephyr
4 Dec 2002, 6:20 PM
why do people say abyss so much!? FUCK
on missing time by Bill Z Bub
21 Dec 2002, 4:44 PM
This is very lovely
on some deleted poem
4 Dec 2002, 6:22 PM
Its good. I especially like how it is presented. The layout suggests carpal tunnel led to it.
on Shipwrecked... by LovingWhispers
26 Nov 2002, 4:05 PM
goooood
on DESERVING NOTHING MORE THAN LONLYNESS by LETO
19 Dec 2002, 7:28 PM
hated it
on with no words to write by nentwined
17 Dec 2002, 5:41 PM
You took my poem idea. That's so lame! I wrote before you though so HA!
on downtown bus by Bill Z Bub
21 Dec 2002, 4:42 PM
I love downtown buses hehe. I just don't like it when the driver tells you too put your feet down off of the seat or gives you a hard time.. or mentally ill riders. The club part is a good drop-off too. Nice...and the last stanza is a great ending. 9
on killer boredom butterfly (psychedelic) by nentwined
17 Dec 2002, 5:42 PM
reminds me of crap. just kidding, its good. butteflies.....
on killer boredom butterfly (esoteric) by nentwined
17 Dec 2002, 5:43 PM
esoteric? hardly. 8.
on dream dream dream dream dream by nentwined
17 Dec 2002, 5:44 PM
was there really a need for five "dreams"? how about dream to the fifth. Other than that its good but i dont get the free part. It doesnt fit. 6.
on Ode to the unwanted chip by deadstar
26 Nov 2002, 4:13 PM
can u have an ode to yourself? SURE! why not! Tintagiles.. be open minded McCain sucks.
on some deleted poem
26 Nov 2002, 3:56 PM
10...because misspellers rewl and so do eskimo pies and so do people who everyone finds distant.
on Pleas Dont.. by MysticalRaven88
26 Nov 2002, 4:02 PM
Oh Christ... now people think you're a genious! ARE THEY INSANE! This is crap....CRAP where is the substance... why must you complain? Why not show anger about it instead in an exciting way. Im dying reading your poetry....
just my opinion though.. dont listen to me if u dont want to... I give it a 5
just my opinion though.. dont listen to me if u dont want to... I give it a 5
on some deleted poem
26 Nov 2002, 4:04 PM
OKAY! here we go again.. The sad sad sad world of Melinda. Go buy some kleenex will ya!?
on The mechanics of love by deadstar
26 Nov 2002, 4:07 PM
AHHHHHH this is awesome.
on The Gunfighter by deadstar
26 Nov 2002, 4:09 PM
I'm beginning to get the idea you are a great poet
on Innocence lost by deadstar
26 Nov 2002, 4:11 PM
totally..
We can't die for our governments...the loss of innocence is demanding..so true.
We can't die for our governments...the loss of innocence is demanding..so true.
on Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
16 Dec 2002, 7:28 PM
ku-la mira bella. ah! ah! ku-la fon-ta-bo. Bring a torch Jeanette Isabella. JESU!