Re: The Story Of Man by sweetzephyr	4-Dec-02/6:20 PM
why do people say abyss so much!? FUCK
Re: missing time by Bill Z Bub	21-Dec-02/4:44 PM
This is very lovely
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Dec-02/6:22 PM
Its good. I especially like how it is presented. The layout suggests carpal tunnel led to it.
Re: Shipwrecked... by LovingWhispers	26-Nov-02/4:05 PM
goooood
Re: DESERVING NOTHING MORE THAN LONLYNESS by LETO	19-Dec-02/7:28 PM
hated it
Re: with no words to write by nentwined	17-Dec-02/5:41 PM
You took my poem idea. That's so lame! I wrote before you though so HA!
Re: downtown bus by Bill Z Bub	21-Dec-02/4:42 PM
I love downtown buses hehe. I just don't like it when the driver tells you too put your feet down off of the seat or gives you a hard time.. or mentally ill riders. The club part is a good drop-off too. Nice...and the last stanza is a great ending. 9
Re: killer boredom butterfly (psychedelic) by nentwined	17-Dec-02/5:42 PM
reminds me of crap. just kidding, its good. butteflies.....
Re: killer boredom butterfly (esoteric) by nentwined	17-Dec-02/5:43 PM
esoteric? hardly. 8.
Re: dream dream dream dream dream by nentwined	17-Dec-02/5:44 PM
was there really a need for five "dreams"? how about dream to the fifth. Other than that its good but i dont get the free part. It doesnt fit. 6.
Re: can't by nentwined	17-Dec-02/5:46 PM
can't is a sickening word. i like the ending of "can?" It saves it
Re: The Cat by blkarak	10-Dec-02/7:08 PM
nice for a story. I like "Damn"'s rang out and "What Happened," shocked us both. Those phrases as subjects did well.
Re: Ode to the unwanted chip by deadstar	26-Nov-02/4:13 PM
can u have an ode to yourself? SURE! why not! Tintagiles.. be open minded McCain sucks.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Nov-02/3:56 PM
10...because misspellers rewl and so do eskimo pies and so do people who everyone finds distant.
Re: Pleas Dont.. by MysticalRaven88	26-Nov-02/4:02 PM
Oh Christ... now people think you're a genious! ARE THEY INSANE! This is crap....CRAP where is the substance... why must you complain? Why not show anger about it instead in an exciting way. Im dying reading your poetry.... just my opinion though.. dont listen to me if u dont want to... I give it a 5
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Nov-02/4:04 PM
OKAY! here we go again.. The sad sad sad world of Melinda. Go buy some kleenex will ya!?
Re: The mechanics of love by deadstar	26-Nov-02/4:07 PM
AHHHHHH this is awesome.
Re: The Gunfighter by deadstar	26-Nov-02/4:09 PM
I'm beginning to get the idea you are a great poet
Re: Innocence lost by deadstar	26-Nov-02/4:11 PM
totally.. We can't die for our governments...the loss of innocence is demanding..so true.
Re: Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	16-Dec-02/7:28 PM
ku-la mira bella. ah! ah! ku-la fon-ta-bo. Bring a torch Jeanette Isabella. JESU!