on Pure by angel_uy
25 Oct 2002, 5:21 PM
I know how it feels
on some deleted poem
26 Nov 2002, 3:49 PM
QUAH..8
on Shadow's First Attempt at Haiku by loneshadow29
25 Oct 2002, 5:18 PM
haha that's awesome
on Drinker's Haiku by cacophony
25 Oct 2002, 5:20 PM
ha
on At the Bottom of a Well by phbiscuit
1 Nov 2002, 4:49 PM
this is really good. I hate wells though.
on dps by decadentlaurel
10 Oct 2002, 9:40 PM
I can relate..
on some deleted poem
26 Nov 2002, 3:54 PM
that could be a punk song. Some last only 30 seconds. It could be useful had there not been two lines of the some of human kind. A complete waste of words, yet true. I'm so tired of hearing the emptinesses and atrophys of people. Its minotnous tragedy...1
I love your user name though.. Avenging Eskimo.I CHUCKLE
I love your user name though.. Avenging Eskimo.I CHUCKLE
on some deleted poem
2 Nov 2002, 5:33 PM
I give this an 8.
on some deleted poem
2 Nov 2002, 5:35 PM
i give it an 8
on untitled by PunchMeInTheFace
2 Nov 2002, 5:36 PM
i give it a 7
on Jerk ?? Circle by horus8
1 Nov 2002, 4:53 PM
how did you get to be such a great poet?
on A Cold Day in March by PunchMeInTheFace
2 Nov 2002, 5:38 PM
reminds me of a song about this girl who was molested. I dont know if she was molested, probably not. But you describe this girl's feelings well so I give it a 8. It was gunna be 7 but since the title is "a day in march" i gave it an 8.
on Three pointed star by INTRANSIT
2 Nov 2002, 5:43 PM
my haiku is better. HA.
just kidding this is good. but why did it cost many jewish lives? Shouldnt they be saved? 9. three pointed star. as in half of the star of david? Was it torn in half? ahh questions
just kidding this is good. but why did it cost many jewish lives? Shouldnt they be saved? 9. three pointed star. as in half of the star of david? Was it torn in half? ahh questions
on some deleted poem
25 Oct 2002, 5:22 PM
I dunno why.. but "melted rice" just gets to me.. haha
on Acknowledgement* by Sigh'ense...
11 Oct 2002, 7:48 PM
spiritual moccasins.... uh huh...
on dps 2 - new ver. by decadentlaurel
10 Oct 2002, 9:43 PM
I like version one a tad better, (i say the first is always best because its raw, and meaningful) but this one i like because you've added lines filled with description, which is good, but the atmosphere has dissolved. I especially like the last section and of that "where the blue of her eyes meets gold flowing in every direction such beuty awaits before me still all i see is the ground" very lovely
on some deleted poem
10 Oct 2002, 6:23 PM
I suppose if it means nothing it is worth nothing...
on some deleted poem
2 Nov 2002, 5:33 PM
6
on first words by decadentlaurel
10 Oct 2002, 9:45 PM
This is entitled first words, yet it seems like the end of something.
on Stranger by feathers68
2 Nov 2002, 5:41 PM
dementia? Oh please