Re: a comment on First, you gotta bend over.. by Bachus	22-Sep-02/4:12 PM
i know...i was just playing off of a "what if"...you know being imaginative....sorry about your side effects. have you tried sleep and then a good meal...works miracles..on poetry also. just not for me!.
Re: Trespasser at the Men's Bathing Pond by Christof	20-Sep-02/8:42 PM
eat more haggis...be well. lest the guppies attack and chew 'pon your little toe..
Re: a comment on Black Buns by Bachus	18-Sep-02/6:48 PM
actually it's about athletes doing bad food commercials.
Re: a comment on Black Buns by Bachus	18-Sep-02/6:35 PM
please.. people put way to much emphasise on words like the'n' word and the 'c' word..how about the 'p' word or the '678,8uy8' word ohhhhhh ahhhhhhhh.i'm blacker than fucking charcoal and i don't have a problem with it..unless of course you do..then well....you have my sincerist appologies, and well i guess i'll take this opportunity to toe nail my own big nigger vagina..nigger.
Re: a comment on Date Rape Gang Bang by Bachus	17-Sep-02/1:44 PM
both, and unfortunately i've never been a kid, i'm a golem with a dead master. thanks mr. foster. for helping my clay dry faster. are you my master?
Re: Faucet's got a nasty drip. FUCK! Not again! by <{Baba^Yaga}>	15-Sep-02/8:06 PM
who said anything about standards, i'm fucking serious....you cats are voting on the dissinegration of my cock. poor fella's doing the tom hanks in the green mile....and you guys are talking about standards? may ezra pound pound your pound cakes. villians.
Re: America the Beautiful? by pink_punk_kisses87	14-Sep-02/2:19 AM
may i suggest shooting up morphine...have fun. toodles. 2/10. oh and move, and you you dont live here...move here and invent a better shoe bomb. this tooted fodder. enjoy your time here. have a blast tell your friends the 'stiff taled lemurs. piker!
Re: Inside by Jagang	14-Sep-02/2:13 AM
i like how you throw the "his" in at the end. takes the attention off of you. 7/10.I
Re: We visited the gay men on the veranda by Frass	14-Sep-02/2:10 AM
you're such a fag.....lol! "brotherly", as you secretly queef in the night....sounds more like a boring bunch of queens to me...oh yeah...and redundant. enjoy!f
Re: a comment on Remember-me (an ode to those dropped off at the clinic) by Bachus	14-Sep-02/2:03 AM
explain.
Re: My Mamma's Hands by amateurR	14-Sep-02/12:50 AM
see pete! that's why hippies talk alot of shit , but in reality they know shite? it's about the dullery of taking care of incompitent others (that you love more than hate !?) and skillfully wishing for hot sexy lusty longterm love and adventure. not death .twit . you say 4 ..i say double. you want trouble. cuz i got a tipping plate of it.fucker. 8/10.
Re: Sacrificial Sanity by Twisted Wizard	11-Sep-02/2:31 AM
i'm on to you! and i'm not saying what i know or how much i got for it? why do you talk to your penis so regrettably?. burn with magnifying glass. poke the poodle. you have terrible taste in pasta , and your mom drank all my beer. herpes will be your down fall(faggel the proud) if not a well necked chicken bone. good luck.! puppet of love. michael jackson's soiled rhinestained glove....RUN! RUN! YOUR TITS ON FIRE! EVACUaTE.... CHECK YOUR CLEFT FOR MOTHER..false alarm ...you're my hero......zero!
Re: Swimming by [mojo]	10-Sep-02/11:42 PM
INDECENTLY INNAPROPRIATE! what the fuck are you gabbering about...our small pud in christof's mouth with piping hot bravado(oh! what imagery 9!)....fuck-it! wear your tuxedo...hows that for imagery....what a waste of invisible ink...vanish?! your mojo is minus beak. see my kale gun ...duck! 2/10!
Re: a comment on My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus	10-Sep-02/8:49 PM
i'm trying to say. beware! i'm after the gold, the silver, and the slonze!
Re: a comment on My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus	10-Sep-02/10:03 AM
number what? lol! yeah..oh yeah..that's exciting...why must you waste my time with your number associations...i wrote this piece to achieve the rancor i truly deserve zero's..and nothing more...it was written left handed blind folded upon your ancestors potato famished backs! have you found that famous irish viper yet? here look behind my zipper stretch....hah..that's the phalic tuber you've been digging for...lets mash it together 'pon your plumber's cracked grotto..a bit dry ..here..let me spit to reduce friction..
Re: a comment on My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus	10-Sep-02/9:55 AM
Hey nentwhistle! go back to burning man...now there's a contrasting image....../Nentwhistle likes fire/he's into the latest trends/ i wish i was hip?/
Re: Mean Matt was so mean, when a homeless guy asked him for change he gave him a -blank- by beakism	8-Sep-02/9:16 AM
if i had a 4 inch penis with no mushroom helmet...i would be a little resentful too, but hate is such a strong word...try ,..'i hoof you' i hoof you so much, i through a shoe! nice beak.....nice poi...your diversity has me at ammends..
Re: a comment on More 7-Eleven holdups. by Bachus	8-Sep-02/9:09 AM
Like a bull sees red... i see the green uniformed top and whiff the body odor...eyes rolling back my hand caress the pistils hard wooden handle....it's almost time to present my disclaim at the counter....mohammed, had better be cool and comply, or i'll chew the fucking towel off of his head and under mount his camel...high ho silver..away!
Re: The punch drunk underwriter by horus8	7-Sep-02/4:55 PM
well z..the first part "mine, theirs etc"...sets up a metaphorical analyses of my familys self destruction...in the form of a bad acid trip spent reminiscing years later, the second part "coming of etc".. is me still on the acid thinking about my baby sister (the youngest) and how difficult it must be for her growing up with her father in jail her entire life thus far (13 years) and since i myself hadn't seen her in quite a number of years also at the time( cuz i was in the navy and traveling alot on the east coast and through out the world) so i was speculating on how she might have been evolving into a young woman without a good role model (the inscest part mentioned in the beginning has to do with my other sister closer to my age having grown up not seeing me her whole life, and being told by our mother that i was already born when she met my father <mother denied my gestation and birth> so my sister thought that we weren't siblings so when we first met in salt creek california when i was 21 and she was seventeen. she fell in love with me, and would make passes at me daily...because she truly didn't believe that i was her brother (which we were half brother and sister), in fact all of my siblings are half blood with me cuz i am my parents only child, and they each remarried four times (i have four brothers and two sisters) still thats not a very positive thing to tell a child, at any age (that you are not related when you are) i knew but she wouldn't believe me no matter how hard i tried to convince her that what she was feeling was wrong.. cuz my mom had told her that she was her first kid and i was her step son her whole life (she grew up in hawaii), and since we never really met until we were older it caused some serious shit to hit the fan, cuz i let her seduce me one night to spite my mother and reverse her lie with a little black magic...i knew my sister would eventually tell her, exposing my mothers mental wickedness and illness...served her right...except it blew my family even more beyond its already ruined levels...of madness and selfish denial coated greed..<i was just so fucking pissed that i lost control> i suffered many years with the guilt, and still do...the third part (still on a bad acid trip) is about my heroin addiction that spawned from all of this guilt and insanity "before bed" implying my years of fighting addiction and how it affected my relationship with my highschool sweetheart who i was with for five years..i told her everything and we tried to help me, but i just hated myself to much for even her love to save me..and the last part "sixteen lost" (still tripping, refer to the mention of ergot infirst part) is about when i lost my mind and my earliest writings and everything i owned, and all of my friends and family and my well being and much much more...i couldn't remember any of the poems by heart only pieces, so i collaged it all together with different titles i remembered and some lines that couldn't be forgotten..basically the marquise de sade's last supper. i did it with a basic rhyme scheme at the beginning of it....to show the immaturity and childish frustrations that were controling my decision making abilities....hatred and revenge can warp a sensitive beings better judgment and linger forever tainting...no matter...i made a mistake...i forgave myself though, and all of them too...for the sake of my future mental health...i hope that will clarify a few things for you z... sorry for being so cryptic...good afternoon, luv horus's litigator. Bachus.r
Re: More 7-Eleven holdups. by Bachus	7-Sep-02/1:47 PM
yeah! a solid 8 inches of hard hoodlum cockiness. Do you think it was wrong of me to not rape them all, plus take the money...i'm a ham for those convenience store cameras. smile.o