| Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments |
|
knots... (Free verse) by anatheman She said your love will rise
She said your will would be free
The things you see never seem to be
Don?t be this
Don?t fall over this
A place to hide your shame
Found you out
Found you out
Up the ladder:
Being You
Down the ladder:
Poor Hollywood
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.0588236
Posted: May 10, 2002 11:32 AM PDT; Last modified: May 10, 2002 11:32 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.1710143 Overall Rank: 13253 Comments:
[1]
god'swife @ 209.178.176.95
|
6-Sep-02/8:31 PM
|
Reply
You must have spent hours working this out. It shows.
my sister has got you pinned...lol! i would say days..fuck hours...there are so many knots here that it's gordian, or freudian, or perhaps pathetic and pointless..therefore you fail..so flush! my kale gun has a bead on way...i pray you're not allergic to9 calcium..like the the last one..bend over please..t'ankyou.o
127 view(s)
|
||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
