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knots... (Free verse) by anatheman

She said your love will rise She said your will would be free The things you see never seem to be Don?t be this Don?t fall over this A place to hide your shame Found you out Found you out

Bachus 6-Sep-02/8:41 PM
my sister has got you pinned...lol! i would say days..fuck hours...there are so many knots here that it's gordian, or freudian, or perhaps pathetic and pointless..therefore you fail..so flush! my kale gun has a bead on way...i pray you're not allergic to9 calcium..like the the last one..bend over please..t'ankyou.o




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