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Being You (Free verse) by Twisted Wizard
You are the one that always brightens my day, Knowing always the right things to say. Eyes like the everflowing oceans, They go one forever just like my love I would risk my life for you, Just to know that you would go on. You are a best friend to me, Closer than the eye can see. You have made my life more complete, With your love which no one else's can meet. Your heart is like a sacred rose, Only a special one may have it. Words cannot say what you mean to me, Inside is where those feelings stay. If I were to die tomorrow, My love for you would go on and on and on. No one can ever take your place, Or have your ever so lovely face. Being you is where I want to be, Never letting go of what others cant see.

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0588236
Weighted score: 4.1710143
Overall Rank: 13247
Posted: April 30, 2002 8:37 PM PDT; Last modified: April 30, 2002 8:37 PM PDT
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[2]... anonymous @ | 10-May-02/7:12 PM | Reply
all i can say is OMG.....*crys*....umm...this one...ummm...yea....since u know me you should know...*muah*
[10] ==Doylum @ 213.122.169.69 | 19-Jul-02/6:44 AM | Reply
Yes I am pretty amazing I know.
But enough of the shmooze I feel quite nauseaous.
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