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Inside (Other) by Jagang
Desperation inside Like a pile of snakes Slithering and coiling Hissing for attention In a field of beautiful flowers Loneliness inside Like a sea of endless flame Burning with the suffocating agony of my life Sorrow inside Like an abandoned child Searching through the broken pieces of his shattered dreams

Up the ladder: Slice Open My Body
Down the ladder: Presence Of Life

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.706401
Overall Rank: 11961
Posted: September 13, 2002 9:00 PM PDT; Last modified: September 13, 2002 9:00 PM PDT
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[2] pete @ 194.222.69.43 | 14-Sep-02/12:28 AM | Reply
is you xbsx ? or the new beat generation emerging ? ..... do i care ? ..... 2
[7] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 14-Sep-02/2:13 AM | Reply
i like how you throw the "his" in at the end. takes the attention off of you. 7/10.I
[0] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.53 | 28-Oct-02/1:08 PM | Reply
Kill yourself. Pleeease. Believe me, the world would be better without you and no one would miss you.
[10] ciantu @ 216.128.137.27 | 5-Dec-02/2:34 PM | Reply
nice
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