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Inside (Other) by Jagang

Desperation inside Like a pile of snakes Slithering and coiling Hissing for attention In a field of beautiful flowers Loneliness inside Like a sea of endless flame Burning with the suffocating agony of my life Sorrow inside Like an abandoned child Searching through the broken pieces of his shattered dreams

razorgrin 28-Oct-02/1:08 PM
Kill yourself. Pleeease. Believe me, the world would be better without you and no one would miss you.




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