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Inside (Other) by Jagang

Desperation inside Like a pile of snakes Slithering and coiling Hissing for attention In a field of beautiful flowers Loneliness inside Like a sea of endless flame Burning with the suffocating agony of my life Sorrow inside Like an abandoned child Searching through the broken pieces of his shattered dreams

Bachus 14-Sep-02/2:13 AM
i like how you throw the "his" in at the end. takes the attention off of you. 7/10.I




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