Re: Cocky by Goose	25-Nov-02/7:40 PM
famous cock leos. sean penn, madonna, napoleon. bill clinton. but jesus christ-off was an sagittarius with almost..soon to be capricorn qualities.
Re: a comment on OUtSiDEr by debased	25-Nov-02/7:18 PM
no. just her amusing side. 1/2.
Re: Liar by Goose	25-Nov-02/6:04 PM
shhhhh. 9.
Re: Irony by w~* ATHENA *~w	25-Nov-02/5:48 PM
"die-anetics" but volcanoes and lava are so symbolic. point. show them how you control the volcanic side of yourself and they'll buy your book, or die trying..have an eight cuz i haven't.
Re: Maria's ways on how to deal with puberty! by little_angel_maria	25-Nov-02/5:19 PM
if you're left handed..why write with your right?.the problem with puberty? pre-sense of humor, and in all honesty teens go to the movies to finger bang third cousins and lower class man and then let their friends digit smell. in other words farting is not aloud stinky.
Re: a comment on Maria's ways on how to deal with puberty! by little_angel_maria	25-Nov-02/5:19 PM
hysterical. bravo. what a fine indescent observation.
Re: The North Wind by Ranger	25-Nov-02/12:53 PM
i've just seen all your cards.
Re: a comment on The Smurf Village by Bachus	25-Nov-02/12:38 PM
just what i've always wanted. a helmet with a visor. thanks freddy!
Re: Metaphysical Haiku by Idaho	22-Nov-02/12:30 PM
this is exemplirary work to the tenth degree. 10.h
Re: a comment on Smurfette by Bachus	22-Nov-02/11:57 AM
you remember? Gargamel made her to turn on the smurfs and give up the location village.??
Re: a comment on Smurfette by Bachus	22-Nov-02/11:55 AM
do you remember his name by chance?D
Re: Parking Lot by uncannydanny	21-Nov-02/10:35 PM
the material involved in this piece is definitely savory, but the ??? shit has to go danny..if you fix it i'll give you an eight just for the false teeth and wig jettison.
Re: the devil in you by ciantu	21-Nov-02/10:24 PM
Bastard is spelled this way BASS-TURD! and i prefer to be called James. thanks.
Re: a comment on Smurfette by Bachus	21-Nov-02/12:56 PM
she's a taurus, they can only go ignored for a short period of time before they wipe the board...honestly though i don't know why she did that? as far as loss goes it all still was saved in our personal comment areas..right? so. anyway, i'm fond of dark angel i wouldn't want to ah mock our beautifull relationship in any sense...i don't think it was his fault though, she's just like that...always has been too...always either night or day...know what i mean?.
Re: Just Die Already... by loneshadow29	21-Nov-02/12:33 PM
you first. you know how i feel about you, but i'm going to be a big boy for a minute a rate this with no bye-ass 0. lol! naw just kidding here's an eight...because the titles cool and it's all around well done like my eggs benidect and fresh squeezed orange juice..you know it's 85 degrees right now in sunny california..slice of papaya? anyone? 8. mayne add a question mark with an exlamation POINT! for overall stamina down the stretch aye.r
Re: Night-mare by INTRANSIT	20-Nov-02/8:04 PM
i once stole a mannequin.
Re: a comment on Papa Smurf by Bachus	20-Nov-02/6:21 PM
you really don't care very much for smurfs do you. shame really. you must be very old. and bitter.e
Re: Emptiness by Jagang	20-Nov-02/1:39 PM
you no that ride at carnivals called the zipper...i heard they've thrown their cars quite a few time over the years. pray for that. could you pass me thast churo? thanks.h
Re: Orange Hills (Villanelle) by Moss	20-Nov-02/12:16 PM
i watched my gradfather die of parkinson's disease, and it was funnier than any sitcom on the air at the time..what is time? something that obviously scares the shit out of you...now we're even, because the thought of you teaching old people creative writing when you can barely grasp that notion let alone the meaning.. scares the piss out of me, but just for a second. nice orange hill.
Re: Pantoum by Moss	20-Nov-02/12:10 PM
your first problem is the use of pink, your second was the winter thing. the third apparently was looking for your face in the sky, when it's really in your hand.t