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Now I Know (Free verse) by BUFFY0BSESSED
Theres this feelin inside of me and I dont know what it is, I dont know how to handle it, I dont know what to do. My mind is so confused, I can't figure this out, I wish I could know, it all started the day I met you. I suddenly noticed all the pain i felt drift away, The hurt inside began to be replaced with something new. I just wonderin could all this be, could my life have changed, All because i decided to talk to you? Do you understand the impact you made on my life, how much you made me better than i ever was before? You wrapped me in you arms, and I felt happy. I forgot about the pain, and you still do so much more. You make me feel happy, you make me feel strong, You give me hope, you give me a reason to go on in life. You change everything, but I still don't know what to do, Can i live like this, live for once without strife? I never done it before, being happy is something i never got to have, Before you, I wouldn't know what this feels like, whats here in me. I have my doubts, cause i am so lost inside, But I know that with you by my side, I will be the best I can be. With this feeling in me now, I know, I finally know what this is, I know it's finally true. All the time i waited for happiness, and now i have, It's all because I love you.

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.2857144
Weighted score: 4.270016
Overall Rank: 13165
Posted: November 19, 2002 7:31 PM PST; Last modified: November 19, 2002 7:31 PM PST
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Comments:
[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 20-Nov-02/10:28 AM | Reply
i hate you. and your fat and ugly. enjoy your stay...we serve danishes at noon.
[4] sliver @ 65.178.201.171 | 20-Nov-02/11:02 AM | Reply
happiness isn't a gift, it's something you earn. If you can't give it to yourself- no one can force it on you
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.245.180 > sliver | 20-Nov-02/11:42 AM | Reply
Shut the fuck up
[n/a] poetandknowit @ 65.101.213.115 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 20-Nov-02/11:49 AM | Reply
Hey now, silver is from Colorado. We are peaceful, soul-searching folks out here who love our kind bud and republicans. So you shut the fuck up.
[1] god'swife @ 209.179.135.209 | 20-Nov-02/12:07 PM | Reply
Happiness is result of bio-chemistry, and it's over-rated. This poem is awful.
[n/a] poetandknowit @ 65.101.213.115 > god'swife | 20-Nov-02/12:14 PM | Reply
Says you!
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.245.180 | 20-Nov-02/12:22 PM | Reply
Happiness is the look on a butler's face when he secretly dresses up in his Master's clothes.
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 20-Nov-02/12:39 PM | Reply
in fucking deed. priscilla queen of the desert just called me. she want's you to get out of her clothes. now.??
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