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OUtSiDEr (Free verse) by debased
My worth lost, forgotten like an old friendship Emptiness and anger can't handle the truth as dark angels laugh at me with their frowning eyes never am I good enough never quite there my loneliness is kill me sucking out my soul as I gently sit there smiling so much movement around me a dead empty shell death stick your sword into me I am already gone I have bled all my blood instead of simple tears for crying is not an emotion easily forced and by any sign of weakness the killers will devour me I hold to my shell and protect it for it is all that is left of once a great person Full of love

Up the ladder: Whole
Down the ladder: Royal Blood and tears

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.3333333
Weighted score: 4.6821256
Overall Rank: 12102
Posted: November 23, 2002 11:24 AM PST; Last modified: November 23, 2002 11:24 AM PST
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[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 24-Nov-02/2:37 PM | Reply
Rebecca?
[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 > <{Baba^Yaga}> | 25-Nov-02/7:18 PM | Reply
no. just her amusing side. 1/2.
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