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OUtSiDEr (Free verse) by debased
My worth lost,
forgotten like an old friendship
Emptiness and anger
can't handle the truth
as dark angels laugh at me with their frowning eyes
never am I good enough
never quite there
my loneliness is kill me
sucking out my soul
as I gently sit there smiling
so much movement around me
a dead empty shell
death stick your sword into me
I am already gone
I have bled all my blood instead of simple tears
for crying is not an emotion easily forced
and by any sign of weakness
the killers will devour me
I hold to my shell and protect it
for it is all that is left
of once a great person
Full of love
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.3333333
Weighted score: 4.6821256
Overall Rank: 12107
Posted: November 23, 2002 11:24 AM PST; Last modified: November 23, 2002 11:24 AM PST
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