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Royal Blood and tears (Free verse) by Sugarbbybuttrfly
You were here then you were gone,
The sad tragdy happened just around down.
I awoke the next morning to hear the news
I was told the driver drank too much booze
I fell to the couch and broke into tears
We've been together for so many years
This much be a dream, it cant be true
You dont know how much I miss you
It's going to be hard to recover
Especially because you were my mother
What now, I'm so confused
All this pain, I feel abused
Cant you take my hand
And take me to your fantasy land
No dont do that, dont bother
Lots of people need me now, like my father
This is harder then you think
And all this happened because of a drink
Why did this have to happen to you
Please tell me, I dont have a clue
I just have on final request
Before you are laid to rest
Please watch over me and my brother
I'll never forget you my dear mother
I love you mum
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.3333333
Weighted score: 4.6821256
Overall Rank: 12108
Posted: November 29, 2002 5:44 PM PST; Last modified: November 29, 2002 5:44 PM PST
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