Re: A Choir Boy's Spoiliation.. by Bachus	23-Aug-02/12:28 AM
listen, "old man" i'm humbled really? experimentation? i honestly havn't even begun to break into my writing mode yet...i've been to busy being horus fucking8 and raising a family by acting in movies and commercials and theatre and playing and composing music and touring with bands to pay attention until now,lol! whatever? who gives a fuck? you? why? because you're a "coservative writer" i'm lol! and sucking up the "oh you should be published if you're not already praise" fuck off.lol! i'm 28 with a girlfriend for five years and an artist struggling in the thick of it...every fucking day...i haven't worked nine to fivw since i was twenty i do what i want to do "art for lunatics with huge nothings"the flesh mesh mind fuck industry...don't give me your iowa workshop hype shit.. okay! i'm in the middle of it man! on the frontlines and raising a family as an artist so.....take your grown up shit elsewear chief joseph.. i was in the military (navy seals) and i did my share of time with "good ole boys like you" so back off or blaze guns, but don't waste my time...okay i need to write..
Re: Falling... by quantumenterprises	23-Aug-02/12:37 AM
beaytifull and cryptic...it's universal and forever...fell proud..i normally hate this shit...but you have waded through... overall it;s depeche~mode good 8/10
Re: A Choir Boy's Spoiliation.. by Bachus	23-Aug-02/1:54 AM
This is interesting.
Re: Butcher by Christof	23-Aug-02/2:46 AM
he... children of modern night...dontcha know heart ache andv he heartAS COLD i HAVE NO SHIONE FOR YOU DRUEL...DRUEL
Re: A Choir Boy's Spoiliation.. by Bachus	23-Aug-02/1:38 PM
yeah.. bastards gotta point with that one...well made...., but i am not a racist cuz i hate everyone including myself...i am the man that bought mystique...nah...i care alot....alot for the special and disadvantaged...that's why i woke up this morning with my head in a toilet and poo on my wrist (i drink and toast for all of them one after the other)...and a florida shaped poo stain in my drawers...i also let the kitty out on accident..i hope she doesn't get tired..e
regarding some deleted poem...	23-Aug-02/2:06 PM
change "gazing" to grazing, and "shipwreck" to primerib to really become god...lest you fail....and remain molaring a mouth full of clippings...
regarding some deleted poem...	23-Aug-02/2:13 PM
"In a sea-green Coupe de Ville". "In a dream you are smiling As I stab you in the back." great lines...i want one now...the car...not the blood holed man..thanks??
regarding some deleted poem...	23-Aug-02/5:29 PM
does this mean dinner's out of the question?
Re: Multicultural motel by Ming T. Merciless	23-Aug-02/5:42 PM
you sir are indeed a piker and a cad. how dare ye put the pakis down or the vikings, i will be back with a truck full of deputized polocks in a minute. stand fast.... oh the poeam ah...it could have been what's the word...ah..."amusing"
Re: Gilded Stumps of Olde (AN STORY THAT IS NOT AN POEME) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	23-Aug-02/5:46 PM
no. i like it...cuz it's about as crafty and imaginative as it can get. i get it, and i thinks it's real fucking "curio".
Re: A Choir Boy's Spoiliation.. by Bachus	23-Aug-02/11:15 PM
i love babbits stuff...when i'm hunting turkey and bass fishing...nah, he's got alot of talent and he always makes very valid points in his comments, but come on! everyones gotta have a little jeckyle/hyde flair! or life would be a snore and full of long drawn out whitman odes for christ sake...not saying i don't like whitman, just saying...some styles get hollow and overworked, therefore...take a risk..try something new....so, that said....let's pudpull on three...groovy..
Re: Black Buns by Bachus	24-Aug-02/12:07 PM
i demand you lemmings vote 0's when voting on this piece please, lest i run my gay blade thee lengths of your spoiled ethnic chasms! DAMNIT man, i am on a mission here to get to to the top five on the worst list fuckers, and you bastards giving me tens for this 'clearly racist smut' simply is not helping....oh..if you guys need prompting...here goes...i think all of your writings are childrens crayola-d wall scribbles, and black children with speech impediments at that, and of course all of the children have aids and ass warts...not to mention sickle cell anema....there...better, good...when thinking bachus think 0's...thank you for your support, aND MAY YOU ALL CONTRACT JAUNDICE AND MONO! bastards..undeserving prats..the nerve i swear..huh..some people..geez.o
Re: Three Daughters by <~>	24-Aug-02/12:18 PM
excellent ending z..really got me verklemt...love the noah-mediterranian mythos-british isle-mythos======your mad loom..spin on with your tangled skein...tom petty tonight!!!!!!!!!!!!!!yes! 8/10v
Re: One by ben	24-Aug-02/12:33 PM
ben you are evil and full of the devil...i curse you...and have sent a swarm of locusts to carry away and eat your mother's cooking...you went on a reading spree back there friend....ye made some comments that surely were false and misleading...i demand satassfiction...everything you voted well for clearly wasn't and vice versa....you my good man are a burden to your first name...i demand that you re-name yourself, "fifi", this instant...thank you..your peg leg "bachus"! <brought to you by 'go-fast' the better way to go, and 'fermunda weeze' cancer of the lung mixed with just the right amount of bubonic plague> 1/10
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Aug-02/2:25 PM
i will begin by preparing for you a fantastic' dish with many splendid colors and permeations...then i will seranade you with my folk implosion devoted baritone...we will then go horse back riding nude until our genitalia swell from the man beast friction...the movie will be my face splendid and sweating above you, in you....yes...YES..i'm sorry..where was i?...AH .YES! my face with sweat trickling off of my nose and chin into your gasping mouth, and eyes...blinding and choking you with rapture and girth...we are the movie ...my succulent love muscle the director......fuck houston, and francis..well...people with names like francis make lousy leopards (one of my many many many totems)<i am big cat predator><mauler nof the weak>..i on the other hand am highly evolved and Bacchian with the blood of kings and jesu', lets summon up a black sabbath and.. and make grapes crush maroon juice until our toes are stained permanently...yes..yes..our minds dyed forever!v
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Aug-02/10:03 PM
hey! easy...i was at the tom petty concert...relax...i've read the entire series including shelters of stone...horus was just being critical and self removed, he's uppercrust 'private' school high strung....pay ye no heed...so...ah..yeah the talent of mrs. auel is interestingly refferencial to say the least...and i spent many a afternoon doing more then scanning, but her books only saturate one of my many facets, ahhh.. currently i prefer more bacon, crowley, and thoreau...with a little graham greene, poetry lately has been like...ahhh....dylan thomas, poe short stories and plath with a tinge of rumi and bhaddahari "the hermit and the love thief"...sorry about the confusion my rouged petal...no need to get assumptive...i always pay attention...here i'll go browse you're titles to satisfy curiousities....black eyed peas.watershipdown.dragoneyes.the bad place..
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Aug-02/10:06 PM
duck season? 7/10!
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Aug-02/10:15 PM
uhhh yeah....is this poetry or compressed wishful thinking...lucky guy, sounds ahh.like you need to pay attention to the hidden meaning behind mothers ass cracked sand fables.. <broght to you buy the 'trojan horse' a wooden gift horse, not a rubber, and 'festooned' the only way to get tattoos>
Re: Buried at Sea by brazen	24-Aug-02/10:23 PM
check lines 4,7, to fix typos "heal", should be "heel" and "saftetly" should be well you know...just looking out for you bros..editor's advice is golden...
Re: Blind by shwenatjadeflower	24-Aug-02/10:33 PM
Clive Barker just bungie jumped out of the ghost structure of the shattered light house in Alexandria with a piano string tied to his mushroom prince...the judge from kenya gave his dive a 6.667895 for missing the water... i cryed for the loss of a great visionest...