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Multicultural motel (Free verse) by Ming T. Merciless I share a room with an arab,
next door is an aussie, and but one a norseman.
Hells angels reside upstairs,
and half of Pakistan in the basement.
But we all get on very, very well should you ask.
We simply pick on the pikies at the bottom of the fucking garden.
Up the ladder:
Life On Earth
Down the ladder:
When The Iron Curtain Came Down
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Posted: August 23, 2002 5:52 AM PDT; Last modified: August 31, 2002 2:59 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.7310586 Overall Rank: 11821 Comments:
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Tascobar @ 193.130.87.54
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23-Aug-02/6:46 AM
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A rather interesting sideways view of multicultural society and how several peoples can be integrated whilst still alienating others - a very moving piece. 8/10. I will follow your work, He Who Has No Mercy.
you sir are indeed a piker and a cad. how dare ye put the pakis down or the vikings, i will be back with a truck full of deputized polocks in a minute. stand fast.... oh the poeam ah...it could have been what's the word...ah..."amusing"
I like this piece Ming. 8. It could hardly be described as politically correct, but that makes it all the more amusing. The punchline is stark and bold.
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