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Multicultural motel (Free verse) by Ming T. Merciless

I share a room with an arab, next door is an aussie, and but one a norseman. Hells angels reside upstairs, and half of Pakistan in the basement. But we all get on very, very well should you ask. We simply pick on the pikies at the bottom of the fucking garden.

Tascobar 23-Aug-02/6:46 AM
A rather interesting sideways view of multicultural society and how several peoples can be integrated whilst still alienating others - a very moving piece. 8/10. I will follow your work, He Who Has No Mercy.




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